DC Genesis: Azrael

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AZRAEL:

Page One:

1.1: black panel.

CAPTION: The world thinks I'm dead.

CAPTION: The world is wrong.

1.2: Azrael (Jean Paul) descending from a rooftop. He's wearing his hooded costume (retractable spikes-gloves)

CAPTION: It's been a while...

CAPTION: ....But I'm back.

1.3: Side view of Azrael landing on a car.

CAPTION: Mario Falcone has been building up and empire....currently, one of his divisions in engaging in a weapons shipment.

CAPTION: I'm here to stop that.

1.4: Falcone's men shooting at Azrael.

SFX: BUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDA

Mobster: WASTE HIM!!!

Page Two:

2.1: Azrael dodging bullets. He's running forward.

2.2: Closeup on Azrael's hand as he throws shurikens.

2.3: The mobsters are disarmed.

Mobster #2: UNH!

2.4: Jean Paul twist a mobster's arm, breaking it, while throwing a kick behind him, landing on another person's face.

2.5: Jean Paul ducking under a right cross.

2.6: Jean Paul springs up, striking the man with an uppercut. (Blades have been retracted the whole time)

Page Three:

3.1: Azrael turns his head around, the Captain of the mobsters is loading his gun.

Azrael: You're their leader I take it?

Captain: What of it?!

SFX: Chak!

3.2: The bullet leaving the chamber of the gun.

3.3: Azrael popping his blade from his glove.

3.4: Bullet about to hit Azrael.

3.5: Azrael slicing the bullet in half, while effectively dodging it.

Page Four:

4.1: The mobster, shocked.

Captain: ....Damn.

4.2: Azrael charging.

Azrael: hurrrrrrraaargh!

4.3: Azrael tackling the mobster.

SFX: SLAM!

4.4: The mobster punches Azrael off of him.

Azrael: Unnf!

CAPTION: He's trained...not well, but trained nonetheless.

4.5: The mobster kicking Azrael across the face.

Captain: GOOD FOR NOTHING FREAK!

4.6: Azrael catching his leg with his next kick.

Azrael: Freak?

Page Five:

SPLASH! Azrael break's the man's leg. He's in mid fall backwards.

Captain: ARRRRRRGH!

SFX: SNAP!

Azrael: I assure you, I am not a 'freak'

Page Six:

6.1: Azrael leaning over the mobster, his blade tip touches his nose.

Azrael: I believe we established this earlier, but you're a captain for the Falcone family, right?"

Captain: Y-y-yes....

6.2: The Mobster, with his eye crosses, looking at the blade in between his eyes. A drop of blood trickles down his face.

Azrael (Off panel): Good for you....now I think I'll let you carry a message for me....listen closely.

6.3: View of the city.

Captain: AAAIIIIIIIEEEEEE!

Page Seven:

CAPTION: Mario Falcone's penthouse apartment.

7.1: Mario Falcone standing sideways, hands behind his back, looking at us.

Mario: Now...my friend....my friend....tell me what happened....

7.2: The captain from before. He's in a wheelchair, covered in blood soaked bandages all over his face, and he has a cast on his leg.

Captain: I-I-I'm s-s-sorry s-s-sir....one of the f-f-freaks showed up and r-ruined the whole plan....we never got the weapons.

7.3: Closeup, Mario's head and shoulder's, he's raised an eyebrow.

Mario: So you've failed me?

7.4: Mario discretely pulling a gun from his suit jacket.

Captain (Off Panel): Well, sir....I wouldn't put it that w--

7.5: Mario shooting the captain through the head.

SFX: BLAAM!

Page Eight:

8.1: One of Mario's guards enter.

Guard: Something wrong, sir?

8.2: Closeup on Mario's eyes. He's filled with hatred.

Mario: Get rid of the body...tell the man's second in command he's been promoted....tell him not to disappoint me.

Guard (Off panel) Right, boss.

8.3: Mario looking out his window, his back to us. (Classic citywide landscape shot)

Mario (small text): Damn freaks....

8.4: Side view of Mario's head, bowed down.

Mario (Small text): God help us all.

Page Nine:

SPLASH! Jean Paul in a crummy warehouse bathroom. He's looking at himself in a mirror. Multiple scars adorn his body. We can see in a reflection several Azrael costumes through the years. (NOTE: He's been funding himself from the money from the mobster's he's taken down.)

CAPTION: I....remember.

Page Ten:

10.1: Jean Paul's dead body.

CAPTION: I died.....

10.2: Azrael's grave...a hand reaches through the ground.

CAPTION: I was reborn.

10.3: Jean Paul in his Azrael uniform.

CAPTION: St. Dumas was not done with me.

Page Eleven:

11.1: Jean Paul's head turned.

SFX: CRASH!

CAPTION: That noise!

11.2: Jean Paul putting on his shirt and mask.

11.3: Jean Paul running out of the bathroom.

CAPTION: Someone's here.

11.3: Jean Paul standing, shocked. The figure who broke in has his back to us. Only a flaming sword is visible.

Jean Paul: YOU!

Page Twelve:

12.1: The figure's eyes.

Figure: So you've heard of me?

12.2: Jean Paul's eyes.

Jean Paul: I've been back for months....I've heard stories about you.

12.3: The figure's lips.

Figure: So the rumors are true....you have returned from the dead.

Page Thirteen:

13.1: Jean Paul's mouth.

Jean Paul: They might be....

13.2: Closeup on Jean Paul's face.

Jean Paul: What's it to you?

13.3: The figure's chest. A cross is emblazoned on it

NO DIALOGUE.

Page 14:

14.1: Over the shoulder of the figure

Figure: Everything.

14.2: Same shot.

Jean Paul: Tell me....what's your name?

14.3: The figure grips the handle of his sword.

NO DIALOGUE.

Page 15:

SPLASH! MICHAEL LANE in a heroic pose facing Jean Paul, his flaming sword(s) in hand.

Michael: My name is Michael Lane.....and I'm here to make you an offer......

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#2  Edited By The Impersonator

Great chapter!

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@The Impersonator:

thanks!

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#4  Edited By The Impersonator

@primepower53: You're welcome!

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#5  Edited By InnerVenom123

Excellent fight scenes here. They were my favorite part. Well, that and the reveal at the end.

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@InnerVenom123: thanks!

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#7  Edited By batkevin74

@primepower53: Nice work, Azrael Vs Azrael

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@batkevin74: thanks.