DC: 5th World Order: The Flash Part One

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The Flash Part One (In Screenplay Format):

CENTRAL CITY

A man in a white T shirt, brown leather jacket, blue jeans, with brown hair medium length, with a package of food tucked under his arm is running from the Overlord's Justifiers. He's fast for a man of 21, as he dodges energy beams form Justifier guns.

CENTRAL CITY

A medium shot as he clears a fence into the backyard of a family.

JUSTIFIER #1

This is your last warning! Further running will result in execution.

CENTRAL CITY

Close up of the man as he runs. His name is Brooks Hansen

BROOKS HANSEN

How did I even get into this mess?

CUT TO

CENTRAL CITY-EARLIER

Montage of Brooks sneaking into mansions. Each time he steals something and it's cut to him bringing it to some homeless man or someplace that needs it.

BROOKS HANSEN (NARRATING)

I like to think of myself as a sort of Robin Hood. Robbing from the rich and giving to the poor and whatnot. I steal things from people in the employ of THE OVERLORDS, then give them to people in need. I'm becoming something of a legend among the needy, and a criminal in among the rich men.

CENTRAL CITY-EARLIER

Brooks is running from a mansion, a package of food tucked under his arm. Alarms are blazing and hounds and Justifiers are chasing him.

BROOKS HANSEN (NARRATING)

Until today, the guy I robbed had some kind of advanced security system. It alerted the Justifiers, the policemen for the Overlords, immediately.

CENTRAL CITY-now

Close up of Brooks as he falls to the ground, hit by a Justifier's gun. He get up immediately and begins running/limping away.

CENTRAL CITY-NOW

Back view of an old man opening his door as Brooks comes running by.

OLD MAN

Psst! Brooks! Over here!

Brooks hansen (nARRATING)

I don't know who this guy is, but I'll take all the help I can get.

Fade to

CENTRAL CITY

The old man and Brooks are talking.

OLD MAN

I've heard about you, Brooks. I heard good things about you. Believe me when I say I'm here to help.

CENTRAL CITY

Close up of the old man touching Brooks lower leg, his wound.

OLD MAN

You got a little wound there, didn't you? You're fast...I used to be a runner myself...till I finally got running days are over.

CENTRAL CITY

Close up of the old man touching Brooks' heart. Lightning surges from his hand all over Brooks' body.

OLD MAN

But yours don't have to be...you can still run.

BROOKS HANSEN

AAAAAAAAGH!

CENTRAL CITY

Wide shot of the speed force covering Brooks' body, making a Flash uniform.

OLD MAN

You can be the new FLASH.

CENTRAL CITY

Close up of the old man.

OLD MAN

My name's Jay Garrick. I was the original Flash. Only my extended lifespan allowed me to live this long..I've just given you the last of my speed.

BROOKS HANSEN

I-I don't know what to say.

JAY GARRICK

Just say thanks.

CENTRAL CITY

Close up of Brooks.

BROOKS HANSEN

Thank you.

CENTRAL CITY

Medium shot of Justifiers breaking the door down, firing blindly.

JUSTIFIER

PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR!

CENTRAL CITY

A shot goes through Jay's heart, killing him.

JAY GARRICK

AGH!

BROOKS HANSEN

NO!

Brooks cradles his dying body.

JAY GARRICK

It's okay...my time was coming anyway...just use what I gave you...to...help....

Jay's hand falls to the ground.

BROOKS HANSEN

NOOOOOO!

JUSTIFIER

You have been warned. You will be terminated.

CENTRAL CITY

In a scarlet blur, the Justifier topples over. Fists raging, Brooks beats all the Justifiers senseless. The don't even have a chance to react.

CENTRAL CITY

The camera follows Brooks as he runs down the road, carrying Jay's dead body.

BROOKS HANSEN (NARRATING)

I will avenge you, Jay Garrick....I will avenge you...

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#2  Edited By The Poet  Moderator

cool. Added to the library.

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#3  Edited By batkevin74

@primepower53: I like it but Jay Garrick stayed alive for another 2000yrs just for this? Really? Hopefully there's more to it

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@The Poet: @batkevin74: thanks!

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@primepower53: Yay! You used my idea

@batkevin74: I suggested that, my idea was based more on Barry and Wally dying while on the job and Jay retiring, understanding he had to pass on the speed force, embedding all his knowledge about his powers into it (a great deal of knowledge over those 2000 years)

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@CapFanboy: Okay that seems reasonable, no more flimsy that any other superhero origin story ever eg: Ganthet throwing Kyle the ring coz he was right near where Ganthet landed. I do like the image of Brooks running carrying Jay's body, sorta Crisis on Infinite Earths cover but at high speed

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#7  Edited By CapFanboy

@batkevin74: I have a marvel mind on a DC thread. THIS IS NOT RIGHT!!!!

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#8  Edited By batkevin74

@CapFanboy: They do work across the street from each other so it happens, everything that was once DC's is now Marvel's and vice versa. Luckily them mutants didn't take off in the DCU.

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#9  Edited By CapFanboy

@batkevin74: Have you noticed that in a week, they've gone from the only good titles being spidey and daredevil to having the Avengers suddenly become good as well.

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#10  Edited By batkevin74

@primepower53: Are you still doing this new Flash or has he fallen by the way side?

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@batkevin74: i dropped all my titles in favor of editing. You can do this if you want

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#12  Edited By batkevin74

@primepower53: Sure that'd be great!

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@primepower53: Bumped and Chapter 2 is up