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When @impurestcheese announced the death of Marvel Mayhem, it made me think. At first I shrugged it off but as I lay in my bed at night I had a different mindset. I wanted to dedicate this contest to Marvel Mayhem and its creators/contributors. However, I had a few problems doing so. The word that stood in my mind was appreciation but I couldn't develop my idea. Personally I appreciated the exposure it gave me as a writer. But how would one show appreciation to the group, I thought. They could with a story-- or a character. But unfortunately I couldn't generate the right idea.

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The aim of this contest is to create an original superhero/villain, they can be anything: mutant, alien, superhuman etc. However, their story will be an introduction to the world, kind of like coming out in a way. This should be more like a character study, dealing with things like what motivated them or their resentments if any. It is also set in a universe very similar/identical to Marvel Mayhem (what a coincidence!). You can even make references to the characters existing in the Mayhem universe if you like.

Rules:

  • The word limit should be 1,500 words.
  • Deadline is 16/9/2014 at 11:59pm UK time

Oh and RIP Marvel Mayhem.

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#4  Edited By ImpurestCheese

@wildvine: You're welcome. May sit this one out due to the unfair advantage I have. Dam my photographic memory.

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@impurestcheese: Don't you dare sit this one out!

...However, I have a problem with this contest- it presupposes that everyone is familiar with what makes Marvel Mayhem different from the regular Marvel Universe. I personally have no clue of that. I've read very little of that group, most of it by ImpurestCheese or Batkevin74, and most of that so long ago that I don't remember any of it. I'm supposed to fit a new villain into that?

You've got to give us some more info to work with than "it's set in Marvel Mayhem."

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@impurestcheese: Don't you dare sit this one out!

...However, I have a problem with this contest- it presupposes that everyone is familiar with what makes Marvel Mayhem different from the regular Marvel Universe. I personally have no clue of that. I've read very little of that group, most of it by ImpurestCheese or Batkevin74, and most of that so long ago that I don't remember any of it. I'm supposed to fit a new villain into that?

You've got to give us some more info to work with than "it's set in Marvel Mayhem."

Agreed. I wanna take part in this one, but I don't know anything about Marvel Mayhem :/ This sounds like a lot of fun though, if I knew about it >_<

Good contest!

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@cbishop: @pyrogram: Hopefully this list will help, it's not finished yet but will be tomorrow. Hopefully there will be enough detail to paint a picture of what was...

http://www.comicvine.com/profile/impurestcheese/lists/fifty-important-mayhem-moments/53884/

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@cbishop: "It is also set in a universe very similar/identical to Marvel Mayhem" my guess is that it's a fresh fledgling universe with fresh takes on characters, that's how I see it though I do have an advantage as being a former MMU writer.

@impurestcheese I just realised that this is comics....nobody except Uncle Ben stays dead in comics! MMU will rise again :)

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@cbishop: @pyrogram: Hopefully this list will help, it's not finished yet but will be tomorrow. Hopefully there will be enough detail to paint a picture of what was...

http://www.comicvine.com/profile/impurestcheese/lists/fifty-important-mayhem-moments/53884/

So far, not really helpful, no. Seems like it'd be a great nostalgic ride if I had read all the stuff you're talking about. I have no idea what to do with a Marvel Mayhem contest. Seriously, without some more info, I'm probably sitting this one out. This contest is great for anyone thoroughly familiar with Marvel Mayhem, but a CCC is supposed to have a common base that everyone can work from. Nobody was familiar with Raven Diablo, but I gave everyone common info to write from.

I don't mean to sound whiny about it, but this contest is not made for everybody and anybody to join.

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@cbishop: Every contest, every single contest has it's detractors and objections. Since the people voting may or may not have even read MMU stuff won't even matter because it essentially comes down to what reader likes. Hell I thought I had TMN? in the bag with the radioactive turtle meat line but I ended up with only one vote.

It's essentially create a new Marvel hero or villain. If you drop in for examples: a Thunderbolts reference, a Howard the Duck sighting and set the initial scene at Ma & Pa's Pancake Plaza then you've kinda covered your basic MMU requirements :)

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@cbishop said:

@impurestcheese: Don't you dare sit this one out!

...However, I have a problem with this contest- it presupposes that everyone is familiar with what makes Marvel Mayhem different from the regular Marvel Universe. I personally have no clue of that. I've read very little of that group, most of it by ImpurestCheese or Batkevin74, and most of that so long ago that I don't remember any of it. I'm supposed to fit a new villain into that?

You've got to give us some more info to work with than "it's set in Marvel Mayhem."

Eh it doesn't have to be set in the Mayhem universe if you don't want it to.

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@cbishop: Every contest, every single contest has it's detractors and objections. Since the people voting may or may not have even read MMU stuff won't even matter because it essentially comes down to what reader likes. Hell I thought I had TMN? in the bag with the radioactive turtle meat line but I ended up with only one vote.

It's essentially create a new Marvel hero or villain. If you drop in for examples: a Thunderbolts reference, a Howard the Duck sighting and set the initial scene at Ma & Pa's Pancake Plaza then you've kinda covered your basic MMU requirements :)

Yes, thank you.

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@cbishop:

You could set it in the future and treat Mayhem events like Seattle as history.

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Sounds cool. I'll try and get something in by the deadline.

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@wildvine: See? I have no idea what "Seattle event" means. It's okay though, I've got something in mind.

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One Police Plaza

Miss Mosquito looked at the cuffs restraining her to the table and gave them a tug. They didn’t budge much particularly as they were made of, well possibly adamantium she guessed. The room was plain; the main feature was the mirrored glass window where she presumed people were watching.

“It’s been an hour!” she moaned.

As if on cue the door swung open and in strode two females. One, the red head, looked like she lived in her clothes; the other brunette was smartly dressed. The brunette sat across the table and opened a folder whilst the red head perched on the edge of the table.

“This is Detective Dallas Riordan,” said the brunette “My name is Lieutenant Molly Von Richthofen.”

“Am I under arrest?” asked Miss Mosquito.

“Are you cuffed?” asked Dallas with a smirk on her face.

“…yes,” she replied.

Dallas pushed her glasses up. “Well then, it’s safe to say you’re under arrest. But just in case, because I’m tired of getting effing screwed over by technicalities. You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say or do, and I mean anything, may be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to consult an at…”

“I know my rights.”

Molly looked up “So you’re waving your Miranda warning?”

“Um no, I mean I know, um.” The costumed woman began to stammer.

“Hey!” snapped Dallas “Let me just do the formal reading of it so you’re covered, I’m covered, Molly’s covered and when your lawyer gets here…you’ve got a lawyer right?”

Miss Mosquito looked at Dallas “Um, no. Do I need one?”

Dallas began to chuckle and got up from the table “Oh yeah!”

“Dallas!” snapped Molly, giving her partner a stern look. Dallas shrugged and rolled her eyes.

“Can someone tell me what’s going on?” asked Miss Mosquito as she tried to stand but the cuffs kept her from standing properly.

“Miss Mosquito,” Molly stopped as Dallas sniggered. She waited til her partner regained her composure before continuing. “Miss Mosquito, can you tell me your version of the events?”

“Look, I just stopped three guys from robbing an armoured car out the front of Ma & Pa’s Pancake House.”

“Plaza.” Dallas corrected her “It’s a pancake plaza, not a house. But please, continue.”

Miss Mosquito glared at the red haired detective who was quite rude. “Does she have to be here?” she asked Molly.

“Unfortunately yes,” replied Molly “She’s a very good detective but terrible with people. Especially costumed people.”

“I’m standing right here!” snapped Dallas.

“Try to ignore her,” said Molly as she wrote some notes “You were…?”

Miss Mosquito sighed “I got a tip that there was going to be a robbery. I went down to the pancake PLAZA and there were three guys with guns. I flew in and took them down. Next thing I know a police SWAT team,”

“Code: Blue” said Dallas.

“Whatever, turn guns on me and put me in the back of their truck and I end up here.” Miss Mosquito tried to fold her arms but the short cuff chain prevented it. “Could I get these taken off?”

“Sorry,” said Molly “Not yet. You say flew in? Could you elaborate?”

Miss Mosquito shifted in her seat “I could show you.”

Dallas’ hand went to her gun as Molly’s eyebrows went up. “No, just tell us,” said Molly.

“Okay. Well my…”

“OH GOD!” Dallas shouted as she pointed “Are you related to Mosquito Man?”

“What?” said Molly turning to her partner.

“You know; that guy that got blown away by Bullseye when he took out the bridge. The John Doe in the morgue with no name. Thor turned up, Rage got put in hospital then those idiots broke into One Police and Stone broke that bearded guy’s nose.” Dallas gushed as she wandered about the room “Are you his wife or something?”

Miss Mosquito looked down at the table “I’m his sister.”

“Knew it!” laughed Dallas “So what’s his name?”

Miss Mosquito’s lip trembled “Michael.”

Dallas and Molly looked at each other. The pair of officers did some quick non verbal communication before Molly turned to Miss Mosquito. “Will you excuse us?”

**

Molly and Dallas stood on the other side of the glass with Captain’s D’Angelo and Burdick .

“You need to read her her rights,” said Captain Burdick. “Half reading them isn’t the same as reading her righ…”

“Hey, if Stone and his tinker toy brigade didn’t do their job, how is that my fault?” snapped Dallas before remembering who she was talking to “Captain.”

“I can’t wait to send her back to you,” said D’Angelo to Burdick.

“She’s about to expose her identity to us,” said Molly “She needs her lawyer.”

“She needs a shrink!” scoffed Dallas “Miss Mosquito, really! Was she bitten by a radioactive mosquito or something?”

“A bit of compassion Riordan,” said D’Angelo “I think you’re right Molly. Get her a lawyer before you go any further. As much as clearing up who Mosquito Man was, having her tell us things she may regret la…”

“Oh why don’t you wrap her in cotton wool too captain!” groaned Dallas ‘Seriously, she chose her path the moment she pulled on a costume as opposed to enrolling at the police academy. One day she may be an effing Avenger, but today her actions got an undercover cop killed; one of New York's finest. If she was just Jane Everybody we’d be all over her like radiation in Seattle!”

Everyone behind the glass looked at Dallas. She was right, which was what was slowly dawning on them.

“Read her rights again to be sure,” said Burdick. “Then call her a lawyer. I think She-Hulk’s in the building. We’ll…who is that?”

Riordan, Von Richthofen, D’Angelo and Burdick watched the uniformed officer walk into the interrogation room. There was something off about his walk, his posture, the sai in his hand. Miss Mosquito screamed as the officer drove the weapon into her throat and out the back of her head. Dallas drew her gun and fired through the glass shattering it causing Bullseye to turn around and glare at her.

“Nearly messed up my lack of hair bitch,” he said as he lifted his hat rubbed his bald head.

“DROP IT!” yelled Dallas.

“NOW!” yelled Molly. D’Angelo and Burdick’s weapons also trained on the premier assassin.

“This?” said Bullseye mockingly as he spun the bloody sai in his fingertips “I don’t think so.”

Quick as lightning the sai flew across the room and jammed in the barrel of Dallas’ gun. Molly, Burdick and D’Angelo opened fire but he dove away and was out the door. Dallas tossed the gun and gave chase, hot on the heels of the man who was supposed to be locked up in prison til Thor got old. Dallas scooped up a keyboard as they bolted across the offices.

“Why?” screamed Dallas.

Bullseye leapt over a desk as he headed for the lifts “I got told Mosquito Man was still alive. Can’t be having people I put in the ground come back. Ruins my rep.”

“You’re an animal!” Dallas hurled the keyboard at him.

Bullseye stopped, turned and caught the keyboard like it was nothing ‘Stop it baby, you’re turning me on!” He hurled the keyboard back at her, cracking her in the temple and sending her to the floor and unconciousness.

**

New York Downtown Hospital, 170 William St

Dallas woke up to see Dr Elias Wirtham, an old flame of hers, standing over her “Oh god,” she groaned.

“Nice to see you to Dallas,” smiled the charming black doctor “You’re lucky to be alive. You received a massive hematoma to yo…”

Dallas threw the blankets off and swung out of bed “Thanks, I gotta go.”

Dr Wirtham grabbed one elbow as Molly grabbed the other as Dallas near collapsed “No, you need to get back to bed.” Dr Wirtham “Please, try to keep her there Lieutenant.”

“I’ll give it a go,” said Molly as he left the room.

“How’s Miss Mosquito?” Dallas blurted out.

“Dead,” said Molly as she patted Dallas’ hand. “Poor thing.”

“Bullseye?”

“Gone.”

“Well that’s just effing great!” wined Dallas.

Molly shook her head and smiled “What are you complaining about, you should see the paperwork I’ve gotta do.”

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@cbishop: Actually a lot of fun to write; kinda miss Dallas & Molly

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@batkevin74: Well then, gee, maybe there's more stories for Marvel Mayhem after all. :}

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@cbishop: I'm not the one who "buried" it

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@batkevin74: Drama, drama, drama. I think y'all could keep it alive. Just because it's not a big group of people writing on it doesn't mean it can't continue.

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#26  Edited By Omniscience

This CCC has piqued my interest... I've had a quick look at some reference links and character designs... but I really just want to know more about the kind of universe that Marvel Mayhem happens to be. Is it eccentric? Is it dark? Are the characters not taken too seriously? Or are there major storylines that revolve around the main characters? All in all, just a little world building for us newbs would be nice :)

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@omniscience: The MMU was/is a fresh new retelling of the Marvel Universe. Here's the library http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/marvel-mayhem-library-1459473/ that may help you

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@wildvine: I know, poor little guys. Do you have the link for your Mosquito Man story as I'll put it with this & the issues if Ka-Boom in case someone gets inspired to read them

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#31  Edited By wildvine

@batkevin74: http://www.comicvine.com/profile/blog/marvel-mayhem-mercy-liddle-reporting-4/96095/

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@wildvine: Ta, and I hope you're entering. A special report by Mercy maybe :)

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this sounds fun in all but i don't know anything about marvel mayham

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@renzoa: Just treat it like this part of the synopsis, "set in a universe very similar/identical" to marvel mayhem. If you don't know it don't matter! Just write a story about a hero or villain for Marvel. If you want to delve into what the MMU actually was, here's the library http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/marvel-mayhem-library-1459473/ but regardless you should throw in an entry

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@batkevin74: how do i throw in an a entry i write here or i send you a my character to your e-mail i does it work

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@renzoa: You post your entry here, and then when the contest ends we vote and someone wins and the contest begins anew.

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#38  Edited By Renzoa

THE MIGHTY FISH-MAN

HOW HE GOT HIS POWERS:

One day at the coast of Miami a man name Den G. William. he is an world traveler, he had a dream to travel the world since he was 10 years old after reading a book called "The World Has Secrets And Its Up To Us to Find Them" and he followed that dream when he turned 18 and traveled the world until his 25th birthday came up so he went back to Miami where his family lived to spend time with his family since he was gone for so long . he was at sea, pondering to himself 'that sucks that my father got sick and mother has to take care of him and my bother couldn't come, because he has navy duties " . while pondering to his thoughts suddenly to his surprise he caught a strange looking fish,it looked old like it was prehistoric it had black and brown skin, very sharp teeth.it was like a oversize Parana . He wondered to himself “Should I eat this…maybe I should keep this as a pet so I can show my mom and dad what I caught"

So he put the fish in a fish tank and he went back fishing. A few hours later he hears noise coming from where he put the fish. The fish was going crazy! Thrashing about and banging into the glass, cracking it.Suddenly it jumped out and bit him on the arm.He and the fish wrestled before he managed to rip it off his arm and toss it out the window back into the ocean.

“I’ve lost a lot of blood,” he thought. “Oh god I feel sick. I…think…I’m…”

And he passed out

When he awoke he felt really thirsty after that so he went for a glass of water. He drank it quickly but it did nothing to quench his thirst, it was not enough. He had another, and another, and another before sticking his whole head under the tap. He started to panic and without a rationale reason he jumped into the ocean, and felt much better.

“Why do I have a powerful need for water? What did that fish thing do to me?”

He got back on his boat and noticed his hands were changing, turning blue.

“Ahhh!” he screamed and stopped, clutching at his throat.

“Why does my voice sound different?”

He ran to the mirror in his bathroom and there he saw himself: a blue skinned…monster! Shark like teeth, a tail , and yellow eyes.

Den screamed and electricity pulsed from his body and destroyed the bathroom.

“Did I just became a super hero?”

super powers:

super strength: he can at least lift 15. but given the right conditions he can go up to 25

high speed swimming: in the water its as if he a jet

echo location

electricity

skin manipulation :he can mold his skin to make a shields,swords and arrows.and also he can control his skin to make it hard so hard it can be like steel but given that right condition it can be hard like titanium.

high durability: he can take a hit torpedo form a submarine.

FISH DNA UNLOCK:

The strange looking fish was a prehistoric fish. it survived for so long having all the fishes DNA in one fish.so when it bit the guy he has the DNA of a all the fishes known to man and secret fishes that man doesn't know.but he cant really unlock the DNA unless he does heavy physical training, mental training.

well here is my hero hope you people like him .if someone already made this up that sucks. and thanks to batkevin74 he edited my story.

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@renzoa: Cool, better, well done :)

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#40  Edited By ImpurestCheese

Well here it is, your favourite villains get married, or at least they would if not for...Cue Ball and Stickleback?

The Wedding Crashers

“You look so beautiful.” Spectre cried as Rachel Leighton pulled the veil over her head. “Like one of those beauty queens back home, except without the breast implants.” She added tears of joy rolling down her face.

“Thank you.” Rachel said with a massive smile on her face. “Oh by the way where is Wraithwitch? Please tell me you didn’t let her got anywhere near Vulture’s grandson, we don’t need to add baby eating to the list of potential crimes caused by today.”

Diamondback AKA Rachel Leighton
Diamondback AKA Rachel Leighton

“Don’t worry; she was too busy flirting with Tiger Shark to notice.” Spectre answered as the sound of energy blasts and screaming super criminals radiated down the corridor, before with a crack the doors splintered and the armoured form of the Mauler was thrown into the room.

“What in the…” Rachel gasped as a man dressed in a white body stocking completed with a globe like helmet walked in accompanied by a woman dressed in grey, blades sticking out of her elbows. “You look like…?”

“Yes Miss Leighton, it is I Cue-Ball and my blushing bride to be Stickleback, and we are here to get revenge on you and your fiancé.” The man in white explained.

“This has to be a joke right?” Rachel asked Spectre as the later drew her pistol and levelled it at Stickleback.

“No joke.” Stickleback purred as she left into action, darting around and under the shots Spectre fired before stabbing a knife into her throat. “She’s a ghost right, no long term damage their, I mean when we finish with you we could all be friends.”

“Not…likely.” Spectre croaked as Cue-Ball removed a ‘trick ball’ and threw it at Rachel, thick smoke enveloping her as two pairs of hands dragged her away. Struggling she broke free and grabbed her barrette, as Stickleback came darting out of the fog, a pair of blades flashing silver in the late morning sun. Parrying the first strike and blocking the second Rachel lashed out as best she could, landing a few good blows despite being restricted by her dress. Falling back Stickleback stepped aside as Cue-Ball threw a concussion ball at his target, the throw going wide and shattering the window behind Rachel.

Looking at the newly opened exit route, Rachel leapt her dress ripping as she fell three stories to the limo parked underneath. “Ow, never doing that again without the shock absorbers in my suit.” She groaned as the driver poked his duck like head out.

“You okay Miss Leighton?” He asked as Cue-Ball appeared in the window and dropped a few exploding orbs, the projectiles rolling under the car as Rachel slipped off, dragging the driver with her. Seconds later the vehicle exploded as Cue-Ball and Stickleback ran from the window, obviously hoping to intercept Rachel before she could get back inside the hotel.

“I just paid off the insurance on that.” Howard the Driver sighed before being lead back towards the hotel. “Who were those mooks anyway?”

Howard the Duck AKA er Howard the Duck
Howard the Duck AKA er Howard the Duck

“Unwanted guests.” Rachel answered as she reached the revolving door inside, the body of Whirlwind slumped inside and the mechanism jammed. “S**t they got Whirly too.” She sighed before stabbing the glass with her barrette, the diamond tipped pin cutting an entrance hole back inside. Squeezing into the lobby she heard the sound of music and darted towards the main hall, elbow barging through the door only to see Cue-Ball and Stickleback standing at the alter waiting for her.

“Nice of you to make it.” Cue-Ball sneered. “As you can see your guests weren’t too much of a pain to neutralise without their equipment, the few who were are locked away so they can’t interfere.” He added as one of the bodies sprawled across the aisle took a big gasp of air and opened his eyes only to have a stiletto blade thrown at his head, blood oozing from his new wound.

“This could be a problem.” Stickleback whispered. “I’m beginning to think he is un-killable.”

“Don’t worry babe, we’ve got this handled.” Cue-Ball announced, “Walk down the aisle Leighton, soon your husband will be here and we can begin.” He added as Rachel moved forwards as Howard skirted around the back of the pues, trying to flank the pair of killers.

“Tell your duck to stay where he is.” Stickleback ordered. “We don’t need any of his Quack Fu to ruin this happy day.” She added, her words causing Howard to stop as Rachel reached the alter, her eyes narrowing as she caught sight of the shadowy figure standing behind Cue-Ball and Stickleback.

“You, I should have known.” She snarled as the figure stepped forward to reveal a gaudily dressed man in a jester costume.

The Jester - Dead Apparently
The Jester - Dead Apparently

“You think I could miss this?” The Jester cackled. “My little treacherous snake getting married, I mean I almost killed you enough times for us to be family.”

”But you died!!” Rachel hissed, “You died I saw it, and people don’t just come back to life!!”

“Oh but they can, I’ve seen hell and it really burnt me up.” The Jester answered as the doors to the atrium opened up with a slam. “Ah ha the man of the hour arrives at last!” The Jester cackled before realising his mistake, his grin becoming a look of fear and disgust.

“Not quite.” A voice that sounded like fingers running across a tombstone croaked as Rachel turned to see a hooded figure clutching a scythe made out of bone drift towards them. “Cue-Ball, Stickleback why are you following this fools directions?” She asked as Rachel looked around wildly for an escape route.

“We though you and he…” Cue-Ball gulped as the body in the aisle sat up and slashed towards the Hooded Haunt, only to be knocked aside.

“Rachel get out of here.” Oriole wheezed as he lashed out with the stiletto formally embedded in his face. “Get Jeff and get out of here.” He added as Rachel leapt off the alter and landed on the second row of pues before sprinting out the door. She managed to ascend all three flights of stairs before hearing Cue-Ball and Stickleback reach the bottom. Running along the corridor she stopped at one of the rooms and hammered on the door.

Hooded Haunt AKA Clarissa (see CCC 11)
Hooded Haunt AKA Clarissa (see CCC 11)

“Rachel what is it?” Jeff groaned as he emerged from the room dressed in a three piece suit and tie.

“Assassins, working for the Jester and Hooded Haunt.” Rachel gasped as Cue-Ball and Stickleback emerged from the stairwell. “And they look like us!” She added as Jeff reached inside and pulled a pool cue from his room, spinning it like a Bo Staff.

“Well, well, party is all here.” Cue-Ball grunted in a sarcastic voice. “You never noticed us did you?!” He snapped, “We were that couple ten seconds behind you, we had to watch as you got everything we wanted, and now, now we take it from you thanks to the Hooded Haunt’s magic’s.”

“Bring it you bad Xerox copy.” Jeff answered as Stickleback sprinted towards him, her blades meeting his cue as Rachel dodged a wave of concussion balls thrown at her by Cue-Ball. Picking up one of the projectiles Rachel threw it back only to see the ball smash open on Cue-Ball’s helmet.

“Got to try better then that!!” Cue-Ball snickered as he cracked his knuckles, puffs of blue chalk spraying out of his gauntlets. Racing in he delivered a punch to Rachel’s chin, the blow leaving a blue knuckle indent in her face, causing her to stumble back.

“Rachel no!!” Jeff yelled as Stickleback slipped under his guard and tore his suit open. “Switch opponents.” He grunted as Rachel got to her feet and attempted a clumsy tackle on Stickleback, the lithe villainess darting backwards.

“Got to say I like my old foe better.” Cue-Ball sneered as he flicked open his own cue. “This staff is forged from magically reinforced titanium; no way can you get past my blocks.” He added as Jeff lunged with his cue, the tip striking Cue-Ball’s helmet and sending him flying along the corridor and through the wall of the hotel.

8-Ball AKA Jeff Hagees
8-Ball AKA Jeff Hagees

“Idiot.” Jeff stated as Rachel and Stickleback grabbled on the floor, the pair of women hissing and spitting as they both tried to get the upper hand. Things looked even until Rachel went limp, in apparent surrender.

“One down,” Stickleback hissed as she got to her feet, “One to…gurk.” Before she could finish Rachel had struck with a leg sweep, the blow sending Stickleback plummeting face first into the floor.

“Let’s get changed.” Jeff grunted as he pulled Rachel off the floor. Minutes later the pair reappeared in their usual costumes. “Time to end this once and for all.”

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@wildvine: Maybe as a Marvel Mayhem Vault special. Thinking of writing Diamondback her own non Mayhem mini series in the near future if anyone is intrested

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@impurestcheese: i think the MMU will have a resurgence. Coz you'll write the wedding, this contest, the upcoming NYF continuation, the Mercy Liddle/Trish Tilby story with @wildvine . And as for ^, good work

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@wildvine: Yeah after writing this contest I actually missed Dallas and Molly and the other cops. When Icheese wraps up the Whitewater thing (coz Scourge is in it) I'm going to continue New York's Finest

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@batkevin74: Cool and we have delphic still working on Sentry.

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THWACK Bad bob, bad

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