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#1 Posted by The WeatherMan (3261 posts) - - Show Bio

Another rhyme i wrote, fresh off the pen. Add it to my greatest? Enjoy.

Two, red and blue, hand-guns/

To ensure the devil never sees his damned-sons/

And raindrops to hide the tears/

The pain stops, blood smears/

Below her foot, “Come on you bastard take me.”/

She picks her boot, begins to run, breathing faintly/

Years of wondering, what men are afraid of/

Years of pondering, all her debts are paid off/

She ran into the gates of hell/

Her fate fell, into a funeral bell/

It never rang, nobody ever sang, her song/

Her soul stayed strong, yet, why was she in a place so wrong?/

Flaming pits, heated with hatred/

Surround her, bound her, will she make it?/

The gates closed, the world behind her/

Ties to the reasons, since a girl they bind her/

Flames blind her, so hot they melt her skin/

Patience growing thin, full of struggles within/

”Devil, I’ve come, now show yourself!”/

Screams through the dreams of the damned, “You’re in no health/

A figure arose with a rose in his hand/

”Welcome, my lady, to the land of the damned!”/

With a flash of his eye he melts her gun/

”Not the moon or the sun, not soon you’ll be one”/

The devil spoke, stretching his flaming hand, ready to choke/

But she held on to the rope of hope/

Protected by her cross, he paid the cost/

Not so she would run across/

The bridges of hell and into the depths/

Her steps, are growing weaker/

The cross starts growing bleaker, but she pressed on/

She could only guess on, her stress gone/

Running among many souls, all reaching for her/

The first mortal to reach hell, pastor preaching for her/

The heat bearing, the devil staring at her back/

Breathing, down her neck, deceiving, by turning her eyes black/

She tripped, almost dipped in hell water, blind/

Precious memory, made her draw e-ve-ry strength of mind/

Images to remind, why she came, and who to blame/

So before the devil smiled, she riled, out of the flame/

Screamed in desperation, in the face of annihilation/

She called for him, and through all the stations/

Emerges a deathly soul, his whole, body in chains/

Draped and flaming rags, he drags along, no names/

Are said, instead, he hugs her, and fumes of damn/

Wrap around and bound, as the devil cries, consuming them…/

Why did she come? While some, believe she was sick with cancer/

He prayed to God, to no avail, so to prevail in relief, the answer/

Was to call the devil/

And he came to their level/

And they made a deal/

The devil was to heal/

In exchange, the man would reside in hell forever/

Her love was too great to be apart, now they are in hell… together/

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#2 Posted by Mighty Magneto (13076 posts) - - Show Bio

You got skill man

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#3 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12343 posts) - - Show Bio

Damn. thats good. I wish I wrote like you.

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#4 Posted by Cryo-Wolf (12343 posts) - - Show Bio

hey, got a queston about the Fan-fc forums. Can t be any story you wrote and not have to do with your character any other character? Cuz I have a story about werewolves, but it's not my character. Sure, hs name's Scott, but he's not me. Coul post it?

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#5 Posted by Mighty Magneto (13076 posts) - - Show Bio

yeah man

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#6 Posted by The WeatherMan (3261 posts) - - Show Bio

Yea, post it up.

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#7 Posted by Walkingstone (10637 posts) - - Show Bio

Again, your images are stunning