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9:17 a.m. lower manhatton an ordinary day. people carry on about with their everyday lives, children going to school local business' preparing for the inevitable lunch time rush, birds flying through the air happily singing their songs only they can sing, and suddenly nothingness. a massive explosion of energy rips through the streets leveling 26 city blocks and rendering them to nothing but rubble for a mile. rescue teams are quick to act searching frantically for survivors as they extinguish the flames of destroyed cars all around the area. as the search goes on a group of fire fighters stumble upon a single corpse at ground zero of the explosion. they are amazed that the body although severly burned and disfigured is somehow still intact despite everything around it having been completely destroyed. within moments they call for assistance and wait. they wait as a trio of men come to the site. the trio is comprised of some of the worlds most brilliant men tony stark, reed richards, and hank pym. men better know by their super hero alias' iron man, mr fantastic, and yellow jacket/ant man. as the men converse over the possibilities of how the corpse is still in one piece, they begin to notice the prying and glaring eyes of the people around them as they stare daggers into the corpse. within minutes dr richards raps the corpse in a sheet and transports it out of the area.  

as days go by the men decided to transport the corpse to a remote and secret shield facility in an unknown location, to further study it. for hours they toss out theories on what could have happened, mutant with an inability to control their powers, alien attack, terrorist plot, as they conflict with one another they finally decide to scan the body to figure out just what they are dealing with. minutes go by as the men scan the body all their scan reveal so far is that it is an every day human being with no discernable qualities what so ever. suddenly an alarm goes off as the machine detects a faint pulse, the corpse infront of them is still a living being. they frantically put the being on life support and quarantine it to avoid both infection for the body and to avoid any danger that the person may be capable of. as the men watch the body in its unwaking slumber they converse on how a corpse suddenly came back to life, without exibiting any unusual signs. dr richards and mister stark leave the room while dr pym stays behind. he watchs the body for a few moments and a flicker of green runs across his body, and then leaves the room as well. for days the body days nothing, days then turn to weeks and weeks turn to months. as the body sleeps the world changes around it, an avenger attacks earth, his friends and family, for the death of his wife and child, hero's reveal themselves to be invaders from another world, and a madman takes control of worlds protection agency. 
  
as time passes a madman known as norman osborn takes control of shield and all its information, soon discovering the location of the body the world smartest men tried to hide. within hours he travels to the location the body is being held, and discovers nothing he expected. he finds a body rapped in medicated bandages with vitals of that of a coma patient, no super man, no god, just a lifeless body. but norman being a genius in his own right realizes that everything has its use, and has the body transported to avengers tower, and left under the security of his HAMMER agents. 
 
as the body sleeps the world continues to change around it as one of the earths greatest hero's of all time rises from the grave, and as one of its most powerful beings meets his death and the hands of a god. as the world once again celebrates its heroes in a new heroic age, a heart beat once as quiet as a whisper begins to beat like the sound of thunder. as the heroes celebrate their victory and a new status quo upon the roof of stark tower, iron man goes over all he has forgotten and discovers what osborn did in his absence. upon discovering that he moved the body to the avengers mansion. he orders an imidiate evacuation of stark tower. he rushes to the room where the body is acompanied by some of the world greatest heroes only to discover an empty room with bandages tossed about the floor.  
 
hours later the trio once again assembles, unfortunatly the only one with a memory of what truely happened is dr richards, since stark has forgotten many of his memories, and dr pym was a skrull in disguise. as they view the surveillence tapes they watch as the body wakes up in a dissoriented state of panic. within moments the body rips off its bandages to reveal a fully healed young man, and then walks out of the room with no security there to stop him. as the video ends stark slowly turns off the screen and assembles his armor turning to his peers he says with a static tone "guess we better go find him". 
 
well this is my first fan-fic so be as brutally honest and judgemental as you can 
 
oh and i plan on making horribley drawn comic scenes using paint, i dont even know why but it will amuse me

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so good, alright, or really really bad?