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I plan on writin a whole fanfic if ever find a good way to go about it. its basically gonna be about a new super hero suffering from amnesia trying to figure out who he is and why he was at the center of a blast that killed thousands of people, along the way he's gonna become a member of the avengers and a aquantance of the F4. so heres a quick bio tell me what you think, be brutally honest (no swear words, but mean words are always welcome)

Super Hero Name: He cant think of one so he keeps changing it (went with vega, light, and a bunch of single names usually revolving around stars, energy, and space)

 
Real Name: All he can remember is the name David and the word crane, causing that to be his allias
 
Appearance: Blond Hair, Blue eyes, good looking enough to make girls get the vapors (lol "get the vapors" what is this 1937, cant believe i actually typed that), somewhat muscular nothin over the top, 6ft 2inchs, slight glow while using powers 

Costume: Street clothes made of unstable molecules (trench coat with a couple small yellow streaks runnin down the back and arms, black and yellow shirt, black pants) 
 
Personality: think of a regular guy suddenly thrown into the world of superheroes, he has no idea what he's doing he's just listening to the real heroes so he doesnt get his ass kicked by ultron, but it isnt beginning to take its toll yet, giving him an upbeat attitude

 

Love Interest: LOLs hes got a crush on she-hulk :p, emily a girl working at a bakery, ***** a young sorceress, and is beginning to grow a family connection to the F4

 
Power: Kinetic Energy Manipulation (he can charge objects like gambit, although he's still figuring out how to use his powers so they usually blow up in his face. shoot enery beams/balls of energy think ms. marvel, wonderman, any dragon ball z character. he can absorb kinetic energy simple by walking, getting hit, hell even the earths rotation can give him power. his powers allow him to heal from even the most serious wounds fairly quickly making him essentially immortal. the more energy he absorbs the stronger/durible he becomes, on par with the hulks rage factor, but all his powers come at a price if he uses to much energy his body begins to shut down from the stress and lack of sustainable energy, if he were to lose an arm or have a wolverine level injury his body would basically be at its limit until he's absorbed enough energy to be able to survive. because of his enhanced healing his bodies metabolism has become somewhat imbalanced causing him to either have an unquenchable hunger, or at times not even need food. also has limited clairvoyance like spider-mans spider sense but not as honed and refined, so he knows when s*** is gonna hit the fan he just doesnt know how, when, where, or even why)
 
Equipment: magic sword givin to him by a sorceress after saving her life (gonna be a combination of a katana, and a claymore. and it'll seal away into a small charm he usually wears around his wrist), clothing made of unstable molecules given to him by invisible woman (he has a habit of losing his clothing in a fight do to his healing and endurance factor, so she gave him a suit that was almost invulnerable like supermans) (simple trench coat, jeans, and a shirt). and magic sunglasses given to him by thor, for his "birthday", they didnt do anything and only lasted a couple of days before breaking but damn it they were cool looking
 
Origins: real origin unknown. 2 months before world war hulk after a blast in the middle of manhattan that killed thousands of people, a young mans body is found at the epicenter of the blast burnt to a crisp and somehow still alive. he is takin to a top secret shield facility under iron man, mr fantastic, and yellowjackets (still a skrull at this point) supervision where he lies in a coma for almost 2 years, during dark reign osborn transports his body back to new york into the avengers tower having learned from starks file about the incident, thinking this boy may be useful in the future. after the downfall of osborn and the beginning of the heroic age iron man having learned what osborn did. enters the room to find that his body is no longer there. checking the survellance videos he watchs as the young man wakes up in a delirium and rips off the bandages to reveal a completely healed and somewhat muscular phsyique only before escaping the building unnoticed. as he watchs the tape he discovers the young man only woke up 6 days ago, during the last hours of seige. 
 
Enemies: Hydra, Aim, Avenger Villains, Dr Doom, Mysterious Man named Mr. Kincaid 
 
Allies: Avengers, F4, eventually TOAA
 
Object of important is gonna be a crane, it'll have a deeper meaning to it as the story progresses. but i gotta start reading some fanfic to figure out how to intergrate it well without turning into a corny symbolic object, lol mabye i'll go watch LOST
 

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#2  Edited By DH69

sooo no input? constructive critisism never hurt anybody

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#3  Edited By gui22

Hey you did make a fan-fic topic about him after all!

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#4  Edited By DH69

just a bio
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#5  Edited By CaptainCockblock
@DH69:  cool, very nice. some of it needs further explanation (how he gains energy, etc.) but otherwise, very nice. can't wait to read it.
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#6  Edited By Aronmorales

I'd read, sounds cool.

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@CaptainCockblock said:
" @DH69:  cool, very nice. some of it needs further explanation (how he gains energy, etc.) but otherwise, very nice. can't wait to read it. "

it'll all be explained in the fanfic, already started reading quite a few fanfics, to get a feel on how to write it out
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