A new Almagam Universe: Nightdevil Part 2

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Bludhaven Airport

Matthew stood tall in line, with his luggage by his side. Matthew waited, and saw a figure somewhat in front of him, it was a female. This tall, fit woman looked familiar in Matt's senses, Her heart rate was familiar, and unusual, it seemed to be controlled well, as if she could control how her heart beat. Perhaps not control it, his mind was racing with ideas, Ideas on how come she made him spark inside. Matthew stared, as the line started to shorten. It was her turn next to board the plane too Hell's Kitchen. Matthew knew it was where he had to go, had to go to claim his parents Justice. He was still unsure whether to claim it on his own, without the "Lawyer" side of him doing so. This would be his other side of Justice, one in which he would do with the law not allowed to join.

It hit Matthew, he knew who she was... He remembered.

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12 years ago

Matthew stood tall at age eight, he practiced trapeze with a girl, around the same age, possibly a month younger. Her name was Elektra Raya Vestri. Matthew and her played tag, while he practiced flipping in the Gym, styled area.

"Tag!" Elektra yelled with a bright smile.on her face.

Matthew leaped into the air, and back flipping behind her, with a small tap on her shoulder.

"Tag back!".

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Elektra entered the plane after perhaps five minutes, and Matthew afterwards.

"Hi there." Matthew spoke to Elektra, and she glanced back to Matthew.

"Umm, Hi?" She shook her head, and went back to seating herself on the plane.

"You don't remember me do you?" He said, not quite sure if he was correct, it was her pulse, her double jointed ankles, and wrists it had to be. Once her heart beat, her skeleton was seen in her mind, and it matched, all to well.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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#2  Edited By batkevin74

@DickGrayson: Good work. Couple of grammatical errors mainly commas where you don't really need them but I'm a grammar Nazi. You do realise you've posted this twice

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#3  Edited By DickGrayson

@batkevin74: Yes, computer is messed up, and continues to post two, to three times when I press Start Topic one time, and It won't let me delete the others.

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#4  Edited By RedRobinTimDrake

very good jacob

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#5  Edited By GR2Blackout

Who's Elektra combined with?

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#6  Edited By DickGrayson

@GR2Blackout: She was Combined with Raya Vestri, She was introduced in the New 52.