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Well that was creepy as hell. Intresting too. So how do you plan to use her (or is it him?) and it's hunter state

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Viewing the profile I see a lot of descriptions of her powers and capabilities, but what are her motivations? What would she fight for and what exactly is limiting her character (the conflict outside of controlling her basic powers and preventing her hunter mode from activating at a poor time)?

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Creepy. But in the good way. Nice work.

Creating an entirely separate account for an OC. ...I might try that.

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Ah. Interesting. : )

I should have known Dr_Izza was Wildvine's account...

: P

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Well that was creepy as hell. Intresting too. So how do you plan to use her (or is it him?) and it's hunter state

She was made to be a role play character. Might use her in a Killer Rabbit story sometime.

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#8  Edited By cbishop

@wildvine: You like characters that have some kind of weird surgery fetish. Two minor things:

  1. "Due," not "do." Several times you say "do to (whatever)." As in "due to unforeseen circumstances."
  2. I realize the pic was probably snagged off of the Internet, but that girl is not muscled for martial arts. No control over that, just sayin'.

She sounds sort of like a younger version of Madame Techia. Sort of.

Added to my FF Long Box - Authors. :)

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Can we expect an origin story?

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@cbishop said:
  1. I realize the pic was probably snagged off of the Internet, but that girl is not muscled for martial arts. No control over that, just sayin'.

Wat?

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@wildvine: I'm saying the pic you chose for Dr Izza shows a girl with nearly bone thin arms. If she practiced martial arts, she'd be more muscular. I figured the difference was from finding the pic on the 'net ...Or did you do the picture?

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@cbishop:

That was before she started practicing.

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@cbishop:

Here physical issues started after school. That pic was during internship. Sorry for confusion

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@wildvine: Let's see her in action...the self mutilating toxic freakazoid! :)

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@cbishop said:

@wildvine: I'm saying the pic you chose for Dr Izza shows a girl with nearly bone thin arms. If she practiced martial arts, she'd be more muscular.

Not necessarily...

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@pyrogram said:
@cbishop said:

@wildvine: I'm saying the pic you chose for Dr Izza shows a girl with nearly bone thin arms. If she practiced martial arts, she'd be more muscular.

Not necessarily...

Is this the part where you admit you've practised martial arts for 10 years and your arm still resembles a bent wire hangar?

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#26  Edited By Pyrogram

@capfanboy: It's the point where some people already know my father owns a martial arts club, and I see weedy fks all the time :P

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@pyrogram said:

@capfanboy: It's the point where some people already know my father owns a martial arts club, and I see weedy fks all the time :P

While looking in the mirror?

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@capfanboy: This is the part where I ignore you.

This is the part where I remind you that your father is a vampire and he shouldn't have mirrors. It just depresses the guy, you know?

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@pyrogram: How about I twist that weedy arm of yours until it break--Why are you smiling and-- OH GOD DUDE GROSS.

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@pyrogram said:

@capfanboy: It's the point where some people already know my father owns a martial arts club, and I see weedy fks all the time :P

Okay, point taken. I just figured with any amount of proficiency, they'd have to have some muscle, like Bruce Lee, Jet Li, etc. Which makes me ask: how long have the weedy ones been at it? <--That's just curiosity though- point taken.

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@cbishop: Bruce Lee, Jet Li are some of the best traditional martial artists, plus, this character may be metahuman, so their body may not work the same. Like, their muscles may be more proficient than mine or yours, meaning they don't need as much muscle.

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@cbishop said:

@pyrogram said:

@capfanboy: It's the point where some people already know my father owns a martial arts club, and I see weedy fks all the time :P

Okay, point taken. I just figured with any amount of proficiency, they'd have to have some muscle, like Bruce Lee, Jet Li, etc. Which makes me ask: how long have the weedy ones been at it? <--That's just curiosity though- point taken.

I don't know hopscotch, how long have you been at it?

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I'm getting sick of your fantasies at being at the bear here. It's wrong, man. It's just wrong.

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#40  Edited By cbishop

@pyrogram said:

@cbishop: Bruce Lee, Jet Li are some of the best traditional martial artists, plus, this character may be metahuman, so their body may not work the same. Like, their muscles may be more proficient than mine or yours, meaning they don't need as much muscle.

Fair point.

I don't know hopscotch, how long have you been at it?

That's not hopscotch. I went from debating the point with Wildvine to acknowledging Pyro's point, and then asking Pyro a question out of curiosity. Totally different.

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@cbishop said:
@capfanboy said:

I don't know hopscotch, how long have you been at it?

That's not hopscotch. I went from debating the point with Wildvine to acknowledging Pyro's point, and then asking Pyro a question out of curiosity. Totally different.

No dude......You're hopscotch....That's what I've nicknamed you.

Blame drugs and alcohol.

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@capfanboy: Lol, I will not answer to "Hopscotch."

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@cbishop said:

@capfanboy: Lol, I will not answer to "Hopscotch."

Doesn't mean I won't call you it.

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@capfanboy: That's fine, but it should mean that you expect no reply.

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#45  Edited By wildvine  Moderator

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@capfanboy: Lol, I will not answer to "Hopscotch."

Doesn't mean I won't call you it.

Cap, not everyone is going to welcome your brand of absurd. Besides, I think Pyrogram misses you.

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@cbishop said:

@capfanboy: That's fine, but it should mean that you expect no reply.

To be honest, I don't ever expect a reply.....*sad face*

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Cap, not everyone is going to welcome your brand of absurd. Besides, I think Pyrogram misses you.

They will, eventually. With the use of my God powers!

Aww, poor Roger.

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@wildvine said:

Cap, not everyone is going to welcome your brand of absurd. Besides, I think Pyrogram misses you.

I don't mind his brand of absurd. If I did, I wouldn't read his threads. However, it's probably true that I get to the point of "I don't want to play anymore" a bit quicker than others. <shrugs> I try to take my ball and go home when I get to that point, so that it's not too annoying.

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@wildvine: So is Little Miss Creepy-pants going to be a skin crawling series by you?

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