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DateHeironymous in Indigo, Part 2ViewRead the...
04/08/15The Samurai(Blog) (Forum)Disclaimer
Note: This is a crossover. Heironymous does not normally take place in Indigo or the 5CC universe. -cb
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T+Violence- guns, swords, and fightingWhy Are We Here?
...the samurai turned his attention toward Crystal...
...the samurai turned his attention toward Crystal...

“Halt! Secret Service!” yelled Crystal, and punctuated it with a shot at the feet of the intruder.

As the bullet ricocheted off the floor, the samurai turned his attention toward Crystal, and threw three shuriken at once, moving incredibly fast. She shot one out of the air, one knicked the top of her left ear, and the other lodged in the armor plating of her vest, biting into her chest. She doubled over from the hit, and tried to pull the shuriken from the wound.

The samurai was still running towards Salt when he let another three shuriken fly towards Heironymous. The tip of one bent a little against his chest, but snagged in his coat. The agent smacked one out of the air, caught the other between two fingers, and wasted no time hurling it back at the samurai.

The samurai reached Crystal’s position, knocked her out with an upkick to the face, then deflected the shuriken with his sword. Turning to face his attacker, he froze. “You!...The Escort!...Heironymous!”

Heironymous was walking towards him, and said, “And you…you can hide your face behind that mask, but you can’t hide your smell, boy. Since when do ninjas disguise themselves as samurai?”

“Since I’m sick of ninjas!” he spat. “They pride themselves on adapting to any situation, but they never adapt to the times. I decided I needed an edge if I was to have vengeance for my family. So I found one,” he said, sweeping a hand from head-to-toe to indicate he meant the armor.

“We’ll see about that!” Heironymous growled as he closed the distance between them. He swung a fist towards the ninja-samurai, but was blocked by an armored arm. The agent immediately swept a leg around, kicking his opponent’s feet out from under him, but the ninja caught himself and did a couple of back handsprings before landing upright.

“You will have to do better than that!” declared the ninja, leaping forward and swinging the sword.

Heironymous threw up an arm to block the sword, only to have it cut deeply into his forearm, and slice across his chest. “Yaarrggh!” he cried out, not expecting to be wounded by a manmade weapon. He looked at his arm and chest in shock for a moment.

The ninja looked equally as shocked that it had worked. He gave a breathy laugh as he realized new value in his weapon. Looking at the now angry agent, he said, “The old fool was telling the truth!” He only had a couple of seconds to marvel further before Heironymous attacked again.

They traded punches, kicks, and chops in rapid succession, and Heironymous took more cuts from the sword. The agent started to realize that the armor did give the ninja an edge; it increased his speed, so his reflexes and reaction time were faster. It also made him stronger- he was feeling some of the ninja’s punches. He needed to end this soon, or the kid might get lucky with the sword. Finally, the right combination of feint and punch allowed Heironymous to get the ninja in a hold from behind- left hand under the left arm and around the back of his neck, and the right hand locked onto his wrist, holding him from swinging the sword. For a few seconds, all that could be heard was the sound of both of them breathing hard. Heironymous was ticked, but the ninja was still smiling.

The ninja finally broke the silence to say, “It’s true! It can kill a dragon!” The thought made him laugh breathlessly.

Heironymous tightened his grip a little and said, “Your sword isn’t Japanese, so it’s not the Kusanagi. I’m guessing it didn’t come with the armor. Where’d you get it?”

The ninja laughed again, his breath finally settling. “What does it matter? I will use it to avenge my family!”

Heironymous squeezed tighter, and leaning to the ninja’s ear, said through gritted teeth, “Son, on this entire planet, there are only a handful of weapons that can hurt a dragon, and it’s best that most of them stay where they are.” Giving a stiff shake of the ninja’s sword arm, he demanded, “Where did you get this?”

The ninja fumed, but relented. “In my search for something that could aid me in avenging my family, I met a man in Libya who claimed to know of a sword that could kill a dragon.”

Heironymous scowled at the mention of Libya. He said nothing.

The ninja continued, “This man had a very interesting take on historical and mythical accounts, but his story eventually pointed me to a village in Essex, called Wormingford--”

“--No.” said Heironymous, a hint of fear actually in his voice.

“There, I found the home of a real collector of dragon and dragon-fighting memorabilia. Really amazing place. Best of all was this sword, though,” said the ninja, admiring the blade.

“You fool,” Heironymous said with real dread.

“I took my name from this sword--”

“You stupid boy,” said Heironymous, the strength leaving him.

The ninja took that moment to break free from Heironymous’ grip, and spun to face him, sword extended in front of him. “Now, the dragon who killed my family will know--”

“You didn’t--” the agent said angrily.

“--the wrath of Ascalon!” shouted the ninja.

“No! Noo! Nooo!” shouted Heironymous. “You stupid fool! Tell me you didn’t steal the sword of Saint George!” He roared angrily, and spewed fire at the ninja, driving Ascalon backwards towards the foundry.

When his breath was expended, Ascalon lifted his sword to strike, but a thunderous crash just behind him caused him to spin and find himself staring in the face of the copper-scaled dragon. The dragon roared in his face, and the ninja swung his sword.

Heironymous bellowed, “NO!” which caused the dragon to rear its head back in surprise; just enough for only the tip of the sword to catch its neck. The dragon instinctively drew back several paces, but Ascalon moved forward with him. Drawing the sword back for another swing, he suddenly found his wrist in the vice-like grip of Heironymous again, and he was jerked backwards before he could react.

Heironymous stepped between them as the dragon drew its head back to strike, and shouted, “No!”

The dragon stopped but roared, and Ascalon took the opportunity to strike while Heironymous was distracted. Thrusting forward, he stabbed the agent through his left shoulder. Roaring in pain, Heironymous wrenched backwards, pulling the sword out of Ascalon’s hand, throwing the ninja off balance. With the sword still through his shoulder, and with a savage growl, he broke the ninja’s arm and elbowed him in the face, shattering the mask and knocking him flat on his back. With great pain, he pulled the sword from his body, as Ascalon looked at him in disbelief.

“You should be dead! It should have killed you! Why aren’t you dead?” he shouted hysterically.

“Because I’m bald, not Balder, and this isn’t mistletoe!” Heironymous shouted back, shaking the sword at him. Ascalon looked at him blankly. Heironymous realized the ninja didn’t understand, and his shoulders slumped a little. Tiredly he said, “Ascaloncan pierce a dragon, son, but you still have to hit something vital for it to kill.” The ninja suddenly looked defeated. Heironymous scowled. “You don’t even know what you’ve done, do you?”

“I have failed once again to avenge my family,” Ascalon said quietly.

“This goes much deeper than your personal vengeance,” said Heironymous. “You damned near started a war. This sword is bound by treaty, between Saint George and the Dragons, to never be used to kill a dragon again. Had you killed the Prince of Dragons with this sword, you’d have unleashed hell in retribution against humanity. As it is, if the Saint thinks we stole the sword from him, there may yet be war anyway. He will want this BARRGHHHH!

Heironymous went down from an armored foot to his groin, and then was kicked in the face, throwing him on his back. Ascalon jumped to his feet, grabbed the sword with his good hand, and ran for an exit with his bad arm folded close to his body. As Heironymous concentrated on his pain, he heard, “Humanity can rot with my family! I will have my vengeance!”

The foundry was quiet again for a minute. Then the trolls began to come out of hiding, and the Prince of Dragons walked up and nudged Heironymous with his nose. The agent rolled painfully to his side, and winced. “I suppose the universe owed me that,” he said weakly. As he picked himself up off of the floor, he told the dragon, “I’ve got to catch him. Saint George is going to want his sword back, and his first stop in his search is going to be us.”

The dragon breathed smoke and growled. Heironymous looked at him sternly and said, “Our time here is up. Scorched earth. Nobody can know we were here. Nobody survives. Except her,” he said, pointing at Crystal. “Deal’s off- I’ll make it up to you. You protect her with your life, or you will answer to your father.” The dragon lowered his head in submission, and Heironymous ran for the door.

As he got to his car, he heard the dragon roar, followed by a troll screaming, “Treacherrryyyyyyyy!” followed by only screams. He knew the Prince would walk away from the site in human form when he was done. They didn’t complete what they came to do, but they gave Indigo a head start. Now though, recovering Ascalon was the priority.

Next Issue: Prince of Dragons.-
Please let me know what you think, and thanks! -cbOriginally Presented In: CCC #32.

Story and characters owned by Chris Bishop, copyright 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, 2021, 2022.

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  • Prince of Dragons, The
  • Saint George
  • Salt, Crystal
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Thanh Long/ Tengu, by payno, CV user. This was the image given for story inspiration in CCC 32. Originally drawn for CV user Jonny_Anonymous, who named/ created the character for a Marvel Genesis fan-fic.
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Ascalon (the samurai) [SPOILERS]

This character honestly frustrates me. His origins lie in my stories for CCC 1 & 2, where he was just an unnamed ninja and lover to a princess. Most of the ideas in those stories, I want to abandon, but his love for the princess, and resulting hatred for her father (Heironymous) I want to stay. He wants to kill Heironymous.

The problem is: I gave him Ascalon- the sword of St. George... of St. George and the Dragon. He takes the sword's name as his name. That's even more of a problem, because eventually, I need St. George to get the sword back. I think I just thought of the solution for both of those things though.

Eventually, Heironymous will defeat Ascalon, and get St. George's sword back for him. Then the ninja goes away, because <yawn> he's kind of boring. He has a real mad on for Heiro' though, and he needs some real enemies, so I'll probably bring him back. BUT... the thing I didn't think of until now: I've been trying to figure out how I could keep Ascalon, but give George his sword back, and duh, how simple: St. George becomes the new Ascalon. That lets me keep the interesting character of the immortal St. George (he's immortal in my universe), but without the boring name of St. George lol. Yeah, I like that a lot.

Thanks for reading.

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@cbishop: Hmm wonder what the Indigo will end up being crushed by when Heiro gets his hands on him.

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@cbishop: Hmm wonder what the Indigo will end up being crushed by when Heiro gets his hands on him.

I think you were speculating on what Heironymous would crush Ascalon with. If not, I have no idea what you're saying there. Assuming you were talking about Ascalon, all I can say is wait and see. (Because I don't know yet either) :)

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@cbishop: :-( And no, having a break while I do some survey planning on some DOD sites

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Wow. Did not expect this from a 5CC story, but it's freaking awesome. This side of 5CC needs to be explored more. Are you going to do a 3rd one at any point?

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@redhood13: :} <--grimaces ...Technically, this story doesn't conform to the rules for 5CC- the main one being that no superpowers existed before The Great Impact (which is why Indigo City is quarantined, to try to keep the rest of the world normal). I think the group let me get away with this because a) I had already used it in a contest entry, and b) I'm their librarian, so this was my gimme lol.

I had been the 5CC librarian for awhile, and really wanted to play. CCC 32 came along, and I had an idea for a brief 5CC walk-on with Heironymous, which was this story. This is a crossover very much in the vein of most comic crossovers. You know how Superman and Spider-Man meet in a one-issue crossover, but it's never mentioned again, except maybe in vague references? This is like that. Heironymous is my crossover character. I take him wherever I want and just have fun writing what I hope will be a good story.

I do want to finish this story, but at the end, all things Heironymous will have left 5CC, and the 5CC-verse will be none-the-wiser. Someone may know something happened with the Secret Service in town, or some armored guy, or they may even talk about the Carrier with super strength and fire breath (a mistaken reference to Heironymous). But nobody in 5CC will know that Heironymous is a dragon. It will be a clean break at the end, so the integrity of both stories (5CC and Heironymous) are intact.

A shorter answer is this: Yes, I plan to do a third one. I have been very strapped for time lately, but I will get back to my unfinished stories. -cb :)

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Wow. Did not expect this from a 5CC story, but it's freaking awesome. This side of 5CC needs to be explored more. Are you going to do a 3rd one at any point?

Oh, um, all of the previous response was to say that officially, there is no "this side of 5CC." Magical, mythical, folklore or anything else did not exist on Earth-5CC before The Great Impact. This is 5CC playing along with my crossover with a wink and a smile. :^D

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Oh okay. That's a shame. Great story nonetheless.

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@redhood13: Nah, not really. Everybody wants to start with a blank slate at some point, and that's all 5CC wanted to do. Nothing wrong with that. Because Heironymous has been a crossover character from the start, I can be a little looser in my references, once this all done. Really though, if I don't leave anything or anyone behind in Indigo at the end of this, then there's no reason to mention it directly.

My personal world of characters has been designed to take advantage of all kinds of things that came before, and I have a lot of fun with that. No reason to force it on 5CC outside of this crossover though. They're building something kind of cool.

Besides, I've been tinkering with an idea that could fit within the rules of 5CC. It depends on my (currently very limited) freetime though. We'll see.

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