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#1 Posted by Blackdog2009 (3558 posts) - - Show Bio
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#2 Posted by BruceVeidt (3570 posts) - - Show Bio

The concept is pretty cool.

But if you're looking for constructive criticism, i can give some:

His limbs are out of proportion. And the left arm looks like it's about to snap.

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#3 Edited by Blackdog2009 (3558 posts) - - Show Bio

@bruceveidt: tks but I modeled this pose from an actual surfer in motion, riding a wave. That's exactly how his body looked. Bodies in motion most often look awkward. Of course I exaggerated some of the Surfer's features. Thanks for the feedback. :)

Please look around at my other illustrations around here and critique away, I love it.

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#4 Posted by BruceVeidt (3570 posts) - - Show Bio

@bruceveidt: tks but I modeled this pose from an actual surfer in motion, riding a wave. That's exactly how his body looked. Bodies in motion most often look awkward. Of course I exaggerated some of the Surfer's features. Thanks for the feedback. :)

Please look around at my other illustrations around here and critique away, I love it.

Alrighty

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#5 Posted by Electronica (27 posts) - - Show Bio

@blackdog2009 said:

@bruceveidt: tks but I modeled this pose from an actual surfer in motion, riding a wave. That's exactly how his body looked. Bodies in motion most often look awkward. Of course I exaggerated some of the Surfer's features. Thanks for the feedback. :)

Please look around at my other illustrations around here and critique away, I love it.

Alrighty

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#6 Posted by deactivated-5bb95a9a712cb (49 posts) - - Show Bio

Great job!

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#8 Posted by xMangog__Beastx (3771 posts) - - Show Bio

Not too shaby.

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