Some more Superman pics

So, continuing my Superman drawing rampage i decided to try to draw the picture from the Silver Age of comics where Superman destroys a solar system by sneezing. I also added to this post my older drawing where i've drawn the cover of Action Comics #1.

So those are my drawings :

The Silver Age Sneezing

The first one is my drawing while the one just above this text is the original one ( just black and white )

Action Comics #1

So the first one is the original one...

And this one is mine...

So, once again i thank you all for wasting your time on ComicVine and watching my art.

If you have any tips for me to improve my art please let me know in the comments.

@claymore1998: you asked me to tag you, so here i tag you

Nice.

@beaconofstrength: thanks

Absolutely, sadly never got the notification >.<

Comic Vine notification system is pure evil.

And as always this looks gorgeous, keep up the good work ^_^

I specially love the first panel.

What is wrong with Superman's... everything?

Hehe

Shut up >_>

@notatreeabush: your honesty is really throwing me of my feet.

Anyways, if you could specify. As the author i still feel proud of my work but i'd like to improve. So, if you could specify wich image and what is wrong with it.

Lol hello again, i will skip over the pointd i made before but they do deserve to be made again. For starters i dont understand ur choice to take away the sharpness of the letters and lower the line count in the first panel. Also rhe lines dont flow upwards like they did, its all coming out from a single point just behind superman all from that one point. Also replacing the shading inside the clouds with those small lines was another bad decision. Also with ur destroyed planets, remember they were all part of one piece not just random pieces. Also ur tires are different sizes....and none of them are umm..circles? You really should get into the habit of adding highlights and u make supermans head bigger then it should be. But the most important advice i will reinforce. Make it. The exact same. As the picture. Down to every meticulous detail fix it if its off. Also just once trace supermans cape, u dont seem to get the flow its supposed to have. Sorry for harping on you so much btw

We.... need... more..

Cool.