My new indie comic -ROBOT WESTERN

Hey there. Would love to hear some feedback on the artwork of these first pages of my new indie sci-fi comic - ROBOT WESTERN. Thank you kindly in advance.

Wow, this looks amazing! Thanks for sharing. :)

@ZZoMBiE13: Thank you for your kind words; much appreciated.

Looks incredible Jim! The art is certainly stunning... what's the age demographic on this and what's your release date looking like?

@blancosombra: Thank you for your encouraging comments. Age demographic is 15 years and up. Issue one is available now on Comixology. Here is the link. http://bit.ly/2skFWiY

You can check out my website at www.robotwestern.com

I really appreciate your interest.

I'm very appreciative of the views my post has received; thank you very much. Here is a little about the story. Robot Western is a coming of age story about a young robot boy named Rusty, and his adventures throughout a sci-fi wild west frontier. I liken it to Star Wars meets Red Dead Redemption. The young boy-bot will soon realize that reality is quite different from his dreams and the secrets the Wild West will reveal to him are far more incredible.

Here is Rusty's Character Spotlight - You will find more spotlights at http://robotwestern.com/character-spotlight

@jimroller:

Excellent all around, nicely done composition, great line art and fantastic colors! Wishing you all much success on this. Hope Comixology rewards you well with downloads... :D

How long did it take for them to approve you? I know there is a waiting approval period.

Like Rams said above, really nicely done art & the coloring pops.

so um, this looks fantastic

Thank you shatterstar and Arkbound for your comments. Very encouraging!

@jimroller:

Glad to hear. Thats a lot less than what I had heard but understandably so. Strange that the software would take so long. What size and dpi did you send in?

Not sure how familiar you are with comixology but their software allows the reader to view the comic panel by panel as well as page by page so it takes some time to adapt the comic to that format. The size of pages were 2063 by 3131 pixels at a 300 dpi. I heard the same concerns about the long wait time and also problems with their customer service but every time I emailed them with questions they responded the very next day. My experience with them has been great so far.

@jimroller:

Thats encouraging to hear. Thanks for the feedback on the size and let us know how sales go for you. Not sure what is the right theme to push in an indie comic to catch enough of an interest but I certainly hope you succeed. I understand how much time and effort goes into all of this.

Good Luck!!

@ramsillustrations: Thank you kindly again.

@jimroller: Looks nice. Only very minor thing I saw was "fourty" should be "forty." One source says "fourty" is an older spelling, but considered a misspelling today.

Hey cbishop. Thank you for pointing that out. I have corrected the mistake. It's very appreciated; you would make a great editor.

@jimroller: Glad it helped. Most of the time, it just annoys people when I catch stuff like that. ...Hm, maybe I could be an editor. lol

Edit: I'm not seeing the correction. The robot is still saying "fourty percent."

Hey cbishop, had some issues with the edit but finally got it fixed. Thanks again.

This is a great looking and reading comic. Well done.

That's some solid art.

@jimroller: the art is amazing it looks incredibly professional I just glanced at it and was amazed. If you would’ve like I would love to help you develop some stories!

@jimroller: Cbishop here. I just noticed something else. The robot engineer says "hunch wolves," then a couple of frames down, the narration says "haunch wolves."

@jimroller: looks amazing. I just bought a copy off of comixology, keep up the great work.

Thank you kindly. Please let me know what you think.