Character Creation #65: Gritty Fantasy

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Finally, after some good time thinking it over, I got an idea for a new contest.

Gritty Fantasy: Basically, a fantasy-type character, but with a grittier element to them.

I figure the deadline for this can work on May 2nd.

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Ok time for the tragic story of Humpty “Hollow” Dumpty.

Hollow was a revered assassin and mercenary racking up quite the reputation for his blood thirsty nature. His kills were always high class citizens and when he received a specific hit he couldn’t resist. A hand maiden to the fair lady of the King- who he was to be wed- had given Hollow easy access in an out to assassinate the fair lady even a pretty reliable get away (flying carriage). Hollow made his way into the castle however all the kings’ horse-men were tipped off. He managed to kill the fair lady even with her guards. He dashed to the great wall of the castle where he wasn’t met by the hand maiden but the Black Bride the most dishonest lady in the land. He had been betrayed and the Black Bride forced him over the wall to his doom. She transformed into the maiden once more as the king came to her. She said she managed to avenge the fair lady. Later the king would marry the Black Bride due to her “loyalty” while Hollow was left in pieces were none of the kings horse-men could put him together again.

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Ok time for the tragic story of Humpty “Hollow” Dumpty.

Hollow was a revered assassin and mercenary racking up quite the reputation for his blood thirsty nature. His kills were always high class citizens and when he received a specific hit he couldn’t resist. A hand maiden to the fair lady of the King- who he was to be wed- had given Hollow easy access in an out to assassinate the fair lady even a pretty reliable get away (flying carriage). Hollow made his way into the castle however all the kings’ horse-men were tipped off. He managed to kill the fair lady even with her guards. He dashed to the great wall of the castle where he wasn’t met by the hand maiden but the Black Bride the most dishonest lady in the land. He had been betrayed and the Black Bride forced him over the wall to his doom. She transformed into the maiden once more as the king came to her. She said she managed to avenge the fair lady. Later the king would marry the Black Bride due to her “loyalty” while Hollow was left in pieces were none of the kings horse-men could put him together again.

This is freakin' fan-flippin'-tastic!

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@armiv2: Thanks, i havnt entered any contests for a bit and i kinda couldnt resist making a gritty version of a fairy tale :P

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The Mouse King of Gorth holds court with his latest queen! Once a great soldier he has since been reduced to surviving through the use of powerful potions concocted by his chief Wizard!

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Might have to bust out me big box o' crayons for this one :)

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Interesting take on this...but still couldn't come up with a gritty character.

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#8  Edited By Decept-O

@blizaga101: This is friggin' awesome! Wonderful story and fun art, a definite twist I didn't expect to see.

@weenman1: Dang this is disturbing, but I like that at times. Awesome take on this one.

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to be continued...............................................................................................may be

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@artiom1q2w: Many Typos but really it was AN AWESOME STORY

AND YOU'RE AN AWESOME ARTIST

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#13  Edited By IcePrince_X

Love the story too! Wow!

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@armiv2: Wow Long time since I've been Here.... Here's mah entry! did it for sh!ts and giggles. Don't even know what grit is.... Hope this will do... I present To YOU....

PUSS The Bounty Hunter!!!!

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#17  Edited By UNDERDOGZ

@armiv2: Then My Puss In Boots will get down to hunt Artiom's Pinocchio

KILLIN TIIME!!!

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Well, goodness me, I almost forgot that today was the deadline. I'll have to get to work on that voting contest ASAP.

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