another drawing! tell me what you think

i am posting this picture because i need to know what to perfect (somthing is missing)regardless its still one of my favs. i draw about 1 or two half-way decent sketches a week and i will continue to post them on this forum regardlesss of what people think just for the hell of it thankyou in advance for all of you that support me on this mission to become a better artist

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You are missing depth to. He looks flat. There are no lines light, or shading to show any depth to his body, or that he isn't a flat drawing. Shading and smaller details give life and dimension. You don't have any of these. If you want to study up on these try using some magazines for either body building or clothes and fashion. Magazines with body building usually have great photos of what a body's shading could look like be using lighting to give perspective to the person's body. Fashion magazines are really good for seeing how shading adds depth and dimension to a person's outfit.

hmmm i have comments on this one but it would be better if i pointed it out using your illustration, btw this seems familiar your taking this or was inspired by then spider-man artist todd mcfarlane am i right? i'll try to point out my comments

as promised here is my comment on your artwork

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just try to study some of the artist work try to study todd mcfarlane's spider-man or anyone that you like to study more of the anatomy thru the other comic book artist after a while you'll be able to develop your own style so keep on practicing >_<