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#1 Edited by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

This is my first CV work so... Be merciful please.

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Any rational criticism will be gladly accepted)

EDIT:

Added two Photoshop versions. What do you people think? Wich of those should I keep, or would it be better to continue the work?

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#2 Posted by BumpyBoo (14778 posts) - - Show Bio

@cyberwarrior: You haven't posted art before? Aw well in that case welcome aboard hehe! This is pretty good :)

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#3 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@bumpyboo: Thanks) What are your thoughts on what could be changed/edited or what should I be working on in future? (Shading, anatomy, dinamics, etc.)

I will add an inked version soon... I think...

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#4 Posted by ARMIV2 (10074 posts) - - Show Bio

That's pretty dang nice, man.

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#5 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@armiv2 said:

That's pretty dang nice, man.

Thanks)

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#7 Posted by kfhrfdu_89_76k (5769 posts) - - Show Bio

Coool...haven`t seen fan art of this character in like...

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Never.

I like it, and advice you to draw more.

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#8 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@kfhrfdu_89_76k: Really? I found the guy very cool in the TT show. Too bad he doesn't have a place to be in New 52... Or anywhere else in comics.

Again thanks, glad you people like it. I need to practice my skills though. Especially in inking and colouring (Photoshop style). So you can wait for more quite soon I think)

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#9 Posted by dimitridkatsis (3019 posts) - - Show Bio

You got it right.

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#10 Posted by V_Scarlotte_Rose (6730 posts) - - Show Bio

I think it looks great. :) Are you planning on inking/colouring it at all?

As you asked for rational criticism, maybe I'm looking at it wrong because of the cape, but perhaps his head is a little high up/off centre?

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#11 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@dimitridkatsis: Merci man)

@v_scarlotte_rose: I will give it a try and ink the drawing anyway. Though time will show if my results will be demonstration-worthy... I'm sorta afraid to ruin it)

As for the head, It's hard to tell because of the cape (as you said). Maybe it is too high. I'l pay more attention to proportions further)

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#12 Posted by kfhrfdu_89_76k (5769 posts) - - Show Bio

@cyberwarrior:

I wouldn`t wanna see him in comics. Unless, of course, they`d be directly tied to the cartoon. Because, I really wouldn`t wanna see Red X chop someone in half. Or laugh sadistically when he blows up a baby. Or be easily killed by a bigger villain than him. Or somethin`. Maybe he wouldn`t, in the beginning of his career. But it would be inevitable.

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#13 Posted by Jonny_Anonymous (45774 posts) - - Show Bio

@cyberwarrior:

I wouldn`t wanna see him in comics. Unless, of course, they`d be directly tied to the cartoon. Because, I really wouldn`t wanna see Red X chop someone in half. Or laugh sadistically when he blows up a baby. Or be easily killed by a bigger villain than him. Or somethin`. Maybe he wouldn`t, in the beginning of his career. But it would be inevitable.

I thought he was Jason Todd?

Anyway this is great man!

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#14 Posted by kfhrfdu_89_76k (5769 posts) - - Show Bio

@jonny_anonymous:

They have something in common, but I`m not gonna tell what, `cause that would spoil the surprise from some potential viewer of Teen titans the animated series.

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#15 Edited by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@kfhrfdu_89_76k: A particular reinvention so that he would fit right would be nice. TT is closed a few years by now, so a cartoon tie-in is very unlikely. Plus from what I know, he's an anti-hero. A thief. So you can be sure he ain't gonna blow up any baby's)

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#16 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@jonny_anonymous: Thanks a lot. Nice to see you on the "Artists Show-off" topic)

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#17 Posted by Jonny_Anonymous (45774 posts) - - Show Bio

@cyberwarrior: I occasionally make forays in to forum but it usually depresses me and I leave lol

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#18 Posted by Knightsofdarkness2 (8155 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome art, great job.

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#20 Posted by Eisenfauste (17366 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice, I think you would be pretty good at action shots, i.e. (fight scenes in a city)

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#21 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@eisenfauste: Thanks) Why do you think so? Well, not that I claim the opposite but still)?

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#22 Posted by Eisenfauste (17366 posts) - - Show Bio

@cyberwarrior: I just can see two characters battling it out in a dark and sketchy city, literally. Have you drawn landscapes or are more centered around characters?

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#23 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@eisenfauste: More on the characters, I think. But I'l have to try out what your talking about, man. Maybe it will turn out to be something nice)

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#24 Posted by Eisenfauste (17366 posts) - - Show Bio

@cyberwarrior: If you do, tag me possibly because it sounds like something I would like to see)

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#28 Posted by redbird3rdboywonder (7157 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice job on all 3

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#29 Posted by ARMIV2 (10074 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice!

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#33 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@jonny_anonymous: Hah, glad you liked it) Next time I'l try to draugh a real font however: a building, or a lonely street, or some ruins, a bridge or somethin' so.

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#35 Posted by Bystander (2406 posts) - - Show Bio

@armiv2: @redbird3rdboywonder: Thanks again)

I am going to have to improve my PS skills for colouring and different effects in the future

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#36 Posted by kfhrfdu_89_76k (5769 posts) - - Show Bio

I like both. The craggy surface works.

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#39 Posted by kfhrfdu_89_76k (5769 posts) - - Show Bio

@cyberwarrior:

= )

Looks urban. Also, it does look better with darker, stronger lines. Though, the faint lines made him look more ghostly. Given that he has the power of invisibility, that`s a good touch.

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#40 Posted by Uncanny_XFactor (921 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome job, this is very cool.

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#41 Posted by AwesomestPrime (670 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome.

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#42 Posted by itsomething (3065 posts) - - Show Bio

the abs are...............