A rough Red X sketch...

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#1  Edited By Bystander

This is my first CV work so... Be merciful please.

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Any rational criticism will be gladly accepted)

EDIT:

Added two Photoshop versions. What do you people think? Wich of those should I keep, or would it be better to continue the work?

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@cyberwarrior: You haven't posted art before? Aw well in that case welcome aboard hehe! This is pretty good :)

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@bumpyboo: Thanks) What are your thoughts on what could be changed/edited or what should I be working on in future? (Shading, anatomy, dinamics, etc.)

I will add an inked version soon... I think...

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That's pretty dang nice, man.

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@armiv2 said:

That's pretty dang nice, man.

Thanks)

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Coool...haven`t seen fan art of this character in like...

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Never.

I like it, and advice you to draw more.

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@kfhrfdu_89_76k: Really? I found the guy very cool in the TT show. Too bad he doesn't have a place to be in New 52... Or anywhere else in comics.

Again thanks, glad you people like it. I need to practice my skills though. Especially in inking and colouring (Photoshop style). So you can wait for more quite soon I think)

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You got it right.

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I think it looks great. :) Are you planning on inking/colouring it at all?

As you asked for rational criticism, maybe I'm looking at it wrong because of the cape, but perhaps his head is a little high up/off centre?

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@dimitridkatsis: Merci man)

@v_scarlotte_rose: I will give it a try and ink the drawing anyway. Though time will show if my results will be demonstration-worthy... I'm sorta afraid to ruin it)

As for the head, It's hard to tell because of the cape (as you said). Maybe it is too high. I'l pay more attention to proportions further)

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@cyberwarrior:

I wouldn`t wanna see him in comics. Unless, of course, they`d be directly tied to the cartoon. Because, I really wouldn`t wanna see Red X chop someone in half. Or laugh sadistically when he blows up a baby. Or be easily killed by a bigger villain than him. Or somethin`. Maybe he wouldn`t, in the beginning of his career. But it would be inevitable.

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@cyberwarrior:

I wouldn`t wanna see him in comics. Unless, of course, they`d be directly tied to the cartoon. Because, I really wouldn`t wanna see Red X chop someone in half. Or laugh sadistically when he blows up a baby. Or be easily killed by a bigger villain than him. Or somethin`. Maybe he wouldn`t, in the beginning of his career. But it would be inevitable.

I thought he was Jason Todd?

Anyway this is great man!

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@jonny_anonymous:

They have something in common, but I`m not gonna tell what, `cause that would spoil the surprise from some potential viewer of Teen titans the animated series.

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#15  Edited By Bystander

@kfhrfdu_89_76k: A particular reinvention so that he would fit right would be nice. TT is closed a few years by now, so a cartoon tie-in is very unlikely. Plus from what I know, he's an anti-hero. A thief. So you can be sure he ain't gonna blow up any baby's)

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@jonny_anonymous: Thanks a lot. Nice to see you on the "Artists Show-off" topic)

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@cyberwarrior: I occasionally make forays in to forum but it usually depresses me and I leave lol

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Awesome art, great job.

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Nice, I think you would be pretty good at action shots, i.e. (fight scenes in a city)

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@eisenfauste: Thanks) Why do you think so? Well, not that I claim the opposite but still)?

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@cyberwarrior: I just can see two characters battling it out in a dark and sketchy city, literally. Have you drawn landscapes or are more centered around characters?

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@eisenfauste: More on the characters, I think. But I'l have to try out what your talking about, man. Maybe it will turn out to be something nice)

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@cyberwarrior: If you do, tag me possibly because it sounds like something I would like to see)

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Nice job on all 3

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Nice!

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@jonny_anonymous: Hah, glad you liked it) Next time I'l try to draugh a real font however: a building, or a lonely street, or some ruins, a bridge or somethin' so.

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@armiv2: @redbird3rdboywonder: Thanks again)

I am going to have to improve my PS skills for colouring and different effects in the future

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I like both. The craggy surface works.

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#38  Edited By Bystander
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@cyberwarrior:

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Looks urban. Also, it does look better with darker, stronger lines. Though, the faint lines made him look more ghostly. Given that he has the power of invisibility, that`s a good touch.

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Awesome job, this is very cool.

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Awesome.

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the abs are...............