@batkevin74: The character description has more story than the scene that followed it. Without any additional story for that, it just reads like "Let's see how brutal I can be in a scene." That's good practice when you're asking yourself "Am I able to write this," but as a story by itself, it's weak.
@cbishop: Sorry. I don't know what is going on with the call outs. I'll just message you from now on.
Oh! <red faced> yeahhh, I didn't see the callouts in the OP...but that's the problem: callouts don't work from the OP for some reason. You have to make them from one of the comment boxes following the OP. Please do that, rather than PM me. A callout brings me to the story- much easier to get the link that way. ;)
@jloneblackheart: Didn't Sulu wear a red shirt at times too? Still, a lot of the extras wore red...I think it was to hide the blood.
And I didn't see all of Voyager- probably about a season's worth, but not all from the same season. My favorite episode was a two parter called "The Year of Hell." Great time loop story.
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