Tell me what you think :D
New Bio!
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"Warsman said:I still have that deal with Lucford in mine. And we're already fighting, remember?"Nothing about me? For shame.:S
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Maybe we should fight then I can add you?
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"TheDrifter said:oh yeah, but thats with old Drift :P"Warsman said:I still have that deal with Lucford in mine. And we're already fighting, remember?"Nothing about me? For shame.:S
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Maybe we should fight then I can add you?
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"Its okay."Any constructive criticism?
Warsman said:
"Slams head into tableDamn straight.
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"Not bad. Although ill admit i liked the old bio but this ones good so gotta give ya propsThanks man.
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"Simon Williams said:Lol, the Sky is blue not Red. The seven seas is blood not red, and the blood in bodies, is Blue. Blue is Winner."Way too much Red.pansy
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TheDrifter said:"Darkchild said:"Not bad. Although ill admit i liked the old bio but this ones good so gotta give ya propsThanks man.
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No prob sh!tstain
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I liked your last bio,with the whole demon thing,that was sick...this one just seems like its hoping on the "assassin" band wagon.
"Darkchild said:looks at Simon odd an says"Simon Williams said:Lol, the Sky is blue not Red. The seven seas is blood not red, and the blood in bodies, is Blue. Blue is Winner."Way too much Red.pansy
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TheDrifter said:"Darkchild said:"Not bad. Although ill admit i liked the old bio but this ones good so gotta give ya propsThanks man.
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No prob sh!tstain
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"Simon Williams said:Blue conquers Red."Darkchild said:looks at Simon odd an says"Simon Williams said:Lol, the Sky is blue not Red. The seven seas is blood not red, and the blood in bodies, is Blue. Blue is Winner."Way too much Red.pansy
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TheDrifter said:"Darkchild said:"Not bad. Although ill admit i liked the old bio but this ones good so gotta give ya propsThanks man.
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No prob sh!tstain
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"Darkchild said:Please just go away :P"Simon Williams said:Blue conquers Red."Darkchild said:looks at Simon odd an says"Simon Williams said:Lol, the Sky is blue not Red. The seven seas is blood not red, and the blood in bodies, is Blue. Blue is Winner."Way too much Red.pansy
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TheDrifter said:"Darkchild said:"Not bad. Although ill admit i liked the old bio but this ones good so gotta give ya propsThanks man.
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No prob sh!tstain
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"I liked your last bio,with the whole demon thing,that was sick...this one just seems like its hoping on the "assassin" band wagon.Eh, I liked my old bio....I just...did'nt feel it was original to be honest.
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Final Arrow, DC, Shadow Huntress, etc etc. all Darkness Manipulators.
"Akira Overdrive said:HAHAHAHA ORIGINAL?"I liked your last bio,with the whole demon thing,that was sick...this one just seems like its hoping on the "assassin" band wagon.Eh, I liked my old bio....I just...did'nt feel it was original to be honest.
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Final Arrow, DC, Shadow Huntress, etc etc. all Darkness Manipulators.
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Jesus i think the only original accounts on the site are the human ones bro. So no matter what u write what you enjoy if thats darkness manips or being an assassin yippie. But if u go in to be an original Vine member. The only ones who pull that off are the humans who kick ass and take names from the big guns, and only a few have done that.
"You know I'm the last to offend you buddy but your character looks like a mix between Gambler and Esther now. I liked the start that you had before better. Witht the two souls, the human and the demon, that combine to be the Drifter. If you ask me, you should return to that.Damn
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"Risky said:Sorry, I thought being honest would help you more."You know I'm the last to offend you buddy but your character looks like a mix between Gambler and Esther now. I liked the start that you had before better. Witht the two souls, the human and the demon, that combine to be the Drifter. If you ask me, you should return to that.Damn
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"Eh, I liked my old bio....I just...did'nt feel it was original to be honest.AND GLOOM. But she's in Limbo.
Final Arrow, DC, Shadow Huntress, etc etc. all Darkness Manipulators.
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The bio itself is good. It was a good read and the pictures and sections are all nice. The new Drifter is very Babsy, though, and that's not a bad thing, of course. IMO switching the psychic weapons for another power would make a huge difference originality-wise. Good job nonetheless. ^^
"You know I'm the last to offend you buddy but your character looks like a mix between Gambler and Esther now. I liked the start that you had before better. Witht the two souls, the human and the demon, that combine to be the Drifter. If you ask me, you should return to that."I kinda agree. Btw, drift that black & white pic you put in your bio of that man and kid i posted, was posted for Gambler, and i think he said he'd use it in his bio... but if you asked him i guess it's fine.
"Akira Overdrive said:lol...there are less darkness manipulators than assassins with photographic reflexes (at least it seems like it to me o_o). If you're looking for originality maybe you should make an entirely new bio with a new power set (look at the powers list, maybe?). Anyways it's a good bio, nice job ^^'"I liked your last bio,with the whole demon thing,that was sick...this one just seems like its hoping on the "assassin" band wagon."Eh, I liked my old bio....I just...did'nt feel it was original to be honest.
Final Arrow, DC, Shadow Huntress, etc etc. all Darkness Manipulators."
Cool. I'll change the psychic weapons.
The bio itself is good. It was a good read and the pictures and sections are all nice. The new Drifter is very Babsy, though, and that's not a bad thing, of course. IMO switching the psychic weapons for another power would make a huge difference originality-wise. Good job nonetheless. ^^
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@ Wanderer
I looked at that list before I wrote the bio :P
Gravitokinesis (or whatever it's called) is pretty rare on here, no? You can do lots of stuff with that!
...just a suggestion, anyways. :P
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