@armistice: Aha, see now your vote doesn't count because Me < you :P
you gotta watch those typos man
@armistice: Aha, see now your vote doesn't count because Me < you :P
you gotta watch those typos man
@armistice: A man who was retired by a word is talking about typos? Awkward :)
@spectrion: It is mano, it is, no worries :)
@armistice: A man who was retired by a word is talking about typos? Awkward :)
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@morte_knightfall: Good, good.
Amora nice intro, and the follow up just as good
Morte, Loved the intro if nothing else it defiantly painted the scene well. And while a lot of Morte reads as "Impero 0.5" to me there is defiantly some undoubtable bad assert there.
Pyro you think your a bad ass don't ya :P
DC always the evil son of a btch aint ya
KD solid intro best of luck
Nelson I predict a solid fight from you
Nova wonder what explosions are like in black and white lol
Rumbles if nothing else at least you clearly got flair ;)
Z hell of an entrance
Ed like entering with a "please don't take this ass kicking personally mood" and then of course once the fights started it looks like it'll be blindingly fast paced
Steel enjoyed the element of humor dropped in
Tranquil is it bad that I want the battle in 2D animation XD
Mattersuit shorter then I hoped but bad ass to read even still
Adhene some grammar mishaps but I believe you got potential best of luck
Morte fn adorable lol I love this character
Last Pyre just burn it all down! I like it lol Superstay nice to actually get to see you in action. Your guys fight was crazy fast though I think its going to be a win for Pyre. Superstay you can write no doubt and there was some clever stuff in those post's but Pyre to me had you on the defensive the entire time with some grade A attacks to boot. Just my opinion though :)
I read or atleast skimmed every fight :P and gave my thoughts.
@assault why do you have to be so bad ass and make me work for this XD
Anywho posted a guitar axe aimed for the face and a barrage of hypervelocity marbles aimed at your heart
@morte_knightfall: I have to get the 'nice' part out so I can just insult you next post ;P
@spectrion: I demand them :P most stages are grand for a reason cant stay in one damn room lol
@morte_knightfall: I really dont need insults love, see your impresive yes but you rely on electricity. All your marvelous skill revolves around energy to amplify yourself in the simplest terminology. And in the simplest terms I can control that energy, your a smart chap im sure you can figure out where that leads ^_~
@syapt: Don't embarrass yourself querida, I'm too far ahead of you. I'm like a Jeston, you're a Flinstone :)
There;s a clean come back in there somewhere...
@syapt: Don't embarrass yourself querida, I'm too far ahead of you. I'm like a Impero light, you're a amped Magneto knock off :)
fixed it for you ^ wouldn't want your insult wasted
Granted last page you made a similar remark thus already using up the Jetsons line so it might be a loss anyway
@morte_knightfall: You should go back to wearing that opera mask at least there it felt fresh. ;) Morte is Impero dressed up as a three musketeer
@armistice: LOL, I'd rather go down as a trash talker than actually winning the KOV.
@morte_knightfall: You are on fire today!
@lady_liberty: Gotta put keep my Stans in their place :)
@armistice: LOL, I'd rather go down as a trash talker than actually winning the KOV.
I concur
@morte_knightfall: I applaud your trash talk ^_~
Now if we can just get your character to be worth applauding ;P
@armistice: Right? :)
@razors_edge: Az with another weak comeback? In related news, air is essential.
@morte_knightfall: You've got the better comebacks today Im just to stubborn to quit :P
@morte_knightfall: You've got the better comebacks today Im just to stubborn to quit :P
Yes you are
@razors_edge: Hahaha, the musketeer one made me laugh though :P
@morte_knightfall: I thought I was just being honest ;)
@armistice: its what makes me, me :P
@morte_knightfall: Psst! Don't win. I've got an av riding on this.
@razors_edge: I thought you were just trying too hard, you know like when you try and write coherently :P
Playin' girl hehe.
@jaegerjaquez: Haha don't worry. I'll just make it past the first round then make my next opponent famous by letting them win :P
Thanks, I agree with you......but, I'm not really that good of a writer.
I knew once I read the first post of his, that I wasn't going to win; And especially after reading his bio. Sheng is a, mainly, H2H fighter. So, since melee attacks don't hurt him, I wasn't going to be able to do anything to him. All I could do was dodge and run, so I just focused on making the match look the best I could. Now that I look at it, I wish I would have sold more; And their were some details I left out or explained wrong.
d^_^b
@morte_knightfall: I have my moments of clarity during my bombardment of insanity :P its a curse and a blessing type deal
@morte_knightfall: YEAH! As long as Assault wins, I'm great.
@jaegerjaquez: Assault's my boy, I'd give him a win anytime of the day :)
Too bad your writing never takes place during one of those moments of clarity :)
Hahahaha
@superstay: Syapt/614Azrael here. Happens alot though sometimes ideas or ways of selling get lost in the writing process. Was still a good match up though, and Im glad you joined anyways even if it ends up brief
@armistice: wont happen :P it just wont lol. I never can get all my thoughts down flawlessly because theres a series of other thoughts around it at the same time
@jaegerjaquez: Haha don't worry. I'll just make it past the first round then make my next opponent famous by letting them win :P
thats just called pulling a Strix. LL did it best to Jaeger ^_~
@razors_edge: To be fair, I was gonna whoop that old man's ass anyway.
@_steel_: I figured you meant the debris and ran wit it.
Gotta say I might call that one of my best posts
Thanks, I agree with you......but, I'm not really that good of a writer.
I knew once I read the first post of his, that I wasn't going to win; And especially after reading his bio. Sheng is a, mainly, H2H fighter. So, since melee attacks don't hurt him, I wasn't going to be able to do anything to him. All I could do was dodge and run, so I just focused on making the match look the best I could. Now that I look at it, I wish I would have sold more; And their were some details I left out or explained wrong.
d^_^b
1 - The fact that you took the time to look back on your work as to how to do better next time speaks volumes.
2 - The fact you sold and took a loss instead of trying to BS a win is not a bad thing, exactly the opposite.
3 - Writing for an RPG is a different animal and takes time to get used to, I read your posts and you are nowhere near as bad as you think you are. Takes time to find your groove, don't sweat it.
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