Deep Blue Beneath Warm Incisive Depth, the Pulsating Heart - OoC

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#1  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

"An my sister

Only you are aware

There is no doubt

I cell

Yet I am no idiot.

The progeny of Gods

Does not blind me.

Daughter of my mother

Our offspring shall rule

The universe.

Neutrino to neutrino

Sibling Stars

Beyond the womb

Of sky.

Such power

In our hands,

We do not fear paths

Underfoot.

Let us produce Gods.

Rule none.

Traveling

High

Ways."

Poetry. The hundreds of maws of the most disruptive and destructive beast, the very essence of cancer itself, was capable of poetry. Winstons eyes fluttered as he fell, his vision a red, distorted blur, catching only a glimpse of the tooth-filled jowls that continued to belch out those damned pulsating embryonic orbs, wombs for demi-gods and demons of the worst order. The gale wind struck each pierced hole in his body like a drill and his fall was trailed with blood, but for this brief moment still, he was alive, for this brief moment still, he could witness the most beautiful evil he had yet to come across. Himself.

This is an RP for any members of the Champions who wish to join, myself, Premonition and if you'd like to join as well PM me and we'll try and figure something out, any other questions, statements, etc, feel free to post them here.

Premise:

Set in the aftermath of a battle between the Umbra Sorcerer, Andromeda and the possessed body of Winston Sharpe; as the heroes have been forced to retreat, the demonic entities possessing Winston have utilised the body's powers and immense magical potential to reconstruct him as a chaotic 'Tree of Life' whose immense and still-growing frame has begun to cast a shadow over the city its rooted to. From the hundreds of mouths that crevice its build, spout forth the tree's fruit, eggs from which replica's of Lovecraftian beasts from an alien nightmare realm will be reborn onto Earth. Can the heroes of Earth defeat this ever-growing threat or will the Earth be doomed to a fate of incessant horror? It's up to the participants, good luck.

The Rp

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#2  Edited By _Zombie_

Jesus Christ that thread title was like a Panic! At the Disco song title.

Jokes aside, sounds cool.

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#3  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

@ZombieBigfoot: ugggh I know, I didn't realise until too late >_< and baha cheers

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Well, I've been invited and this seems cool.

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#5  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

bamf, initial post up, any issues let me know and I'll get on them asap

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Dornan here, I think your post was good, but you need to break up the paragraphs because jesus f*cking christ on a pogostick your first paragraph is enormous!

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#7  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

Ah, yea, my bad :/ edited it

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A rule of thumb is that a single paragraph should be no bigger than four or five lines. You should break up your pragraphs to fit this standard, unless you've got a REALLY wide screen. Don't cut out any text though.

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@Urban_Spaceman: Excellent post really good way to open this up :D

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#10  Edited By CellphoneGirl

Would this take place before or after Enemy Within? >.>

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@xxCellPhoneGirlxx: Well I mentioned in one of my posts for Enemy's Within that this already happened but we should probably wait for Urban to agree of disagree with that.

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#12  Edited By CellphoneGirl

@The Umbra Sorcerer: Because if it takes place afterwards then I wouldn't be able to have CPG participate due to what I have planned for her in Enemy Within.

Instead i'll just use a different character ;]

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@xxCellPhoneGirlxx: Yeah I understand just wait for Urban and he'll tell you for sure. Okaies then :) curious to see who?

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#14  Edited By CellphoneGirl

@The Umbra Sorcerer: Well it really depends on which character will be best fit.

If i'll be fighting a lot Boom Boom is a number one choice. lol

If there will be magic involved Old Lace will work.

Hell I could even throw in Cellular Dog. I could literally find a way to fit him into any possible rpg :P

I could use this to introduce my newest character though.. lol

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@xxCellPhoneGirlxx: Wide variety of options there good luck narrowing it down to who you want :p

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#16  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

@The Umbra Sorcerer: @xxCellPhoneGirlxx: If it was already mentioned as being after Enemy Within I guess we might as well keep it as is, but it doesn't matter too much, so feel free to join with whoever you'd have the most fun writing with.

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#17  Edited By Lord_Johnathan

Le bump.

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#18  Edited By Tellumo

@xxCellPhoneGirlxx:

You should've put a spoiler block...

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As I said to Urban Im working on my post today and hopefully it'll be up tomorrow :)

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#20  Edited By CellphoneGirl

@Tellumo: O_o

Spoiler block on what?

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#21  Edited By Tellumo

@xxCellPhoneGirlxx said:

@Tellumo: O_o

Spoiler block on what?

Because if it takes place afterwards then I wouldn't be able to have CPG participate due to what I have planned for her in Enemy Within.

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#22  Edited By CellphoneGirl

@Tellumo: I'm not killing her off or anything :P

She'll just be occupied with something, and it wouldn't make sense for her to be apart of this then. She'll look like a Wolverine. lol

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There we go posted so let the games begin! ;)

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#24  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

@The Umbra Sorcerer: Ah sorry only just got some computer time to take a look at this, sick post man, nice way to start this :D I guess we're waiting on Az now

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@Urban_Spaceman: No problem and thank you! ^_^ Yep but Im sure Az will deliver a awesomer post :p

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#26  Edited By AndromedaNight

The second half could of been better but posted finally :) sorry for delay

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Loved!!!! it, Dom is just such an awesome character you were right it really was quirky and fun :D

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#28  Edited By 614azrael

  @The Umbra Sorcerer
  IThank ya, thought it would be funer if she was more human and emotional for a change. Unlike Winston n Umbra who are mire the I got this type here :)

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#29  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

@614azrael: ah it's cool, nice post :D but CPG isn't using his CPG character for this I think :/

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#30  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

eh I decided to add a follow-up to set up the set up of the city-battle once the others have posted if that makes sense :/

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#31  Edited By Tellumo

My post will be up in an hour minimum or two at maximum, I'm lightening the mood from the endless gaping rows of teeth that never cease screaming no mother don't put me back in there nooooo, sorry I blacked out for a second...

Edit:Longer than expected I looked at my arms & found out I've been sunburned, badly...

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@614azrael: I don't know I think Dom always seems human in some way!

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#33  Edited By 614azrael
Then I has achieved my goal ;) lol
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#34  Edited By Tellumo

That was a terrible post...

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#35  Edited By 614azrael
Urban loved it alot of the stuff related to Drom especially, was on the dot with how I like her being described :) Tellumo it didn't suck, should avoid controling other characters tho. Some places its fine(like destruction of Winstons shield naturaly concrete wall would of done that) directing what one says or dose though should be vague or minimal.
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#36  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

@Tellumo: Yea you might want to edit that, as Az said, you're not really allowed to control what other characters say or do :/

@614azrael: And cheers :P

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@Tellumo: That was not terrible I love the fact that you bring some fun to your posts other that the small bit about controlling another's character I wouldn't fault it! :) and beside don't worry too much about that a lot of people including myself probably made that mistake in our first or second rpg post etc.. Az could tell you that I made that mistake :p

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#38  Edited By Tellumo

Sorry about using your characters I wasn't sure how to progress without it I'll cut off that end bit

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#40  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

Blafghhjhfdsatr that was a damn fine introductory post >_

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@Premonition: Just got round to reading it and it was amazing!

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#43  Edited By CellphoneGirl

Not my best, but I posted. The beginning was kinda showing a connection to how he knows CPG. Also that thing that happened in his room is a sneak peek to a future rpg I have planned :] Other than that I hope the end when getting there was good. I wasn't too sure what to do. lol

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#44  Edited By Urban_Spaceman

Also posted >_>

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#45  Edited By Icarusflies  Moderator

@Urban_Spaceman: AWESOME post. Really loved it.