My Batman Mythos (Batman #1)

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You are about to enter the world of my Batman mythos...imagine Batman had never existed...until now. I created him. And this is my mythos.

 

 

***This will be done in comic script format***

 

 

Batman #1


Page One:


Panel One: We see Batman’s gloved fist, punching a crook in the face, blood spurts out from his nose, it is broken.



Crook:

OOOOOW

Batman internal:

I’LL NEVER FORGET THE DAY.

Panel Two: We see Batman simultaneously throw a punch to the gut of one crook and a backwards kick to the chin of another one.

Batman Internal

NOT LIKE A SPECIAL TIME WITH YOUR FAMILY….NO…

Panel Three: We see an eight year old Bruce Wayne, kneeling in a pool of blood, his parents on either side of him.

Batman internal (Cont’d)

JUST THE OPPOSITE

Page Two:

Panel One: Batman does a kick to the groin

SFX:

CRACK

Panel Two: Batman throws a right hook to the face.

SFX:

BAM!

Panel Three: Everyone is on the ground. Only Batman stands.

Batman Internal:

ALL OF THEM WILL PAY.

Panel Four: Batman looks to his left, we see one man, completely conscious, part of the gang, lying in a fetal position.

Page Three:

Panel One: No figures, just blackness.

Thug:

WH-WHERE AM I?

Panel Two: Batman has pulled off the blindfold. (It should be in mid fall to the street below) He has the man hanging upside down on top of a skyscraper.

Batman:

TALK! WHO’S YOUR BOSS?

Panel three: We see the thug through the crosshairs of a sniper rifle

Thug:

OKAY! OKAY! JUST LET ME GO…IT’S—

Panel Four: Close up on the trigger being pulled

SFX:

BLAM!

Panel Five: Blood splashes on Batman’s face (focus only on his face, and the horror from the blood.)

Batman Internal:

NO USE PULLING HIM UP, HE’S DEAD BY NOW ….

Batman internal (Cont’d)

…..AND I HAVE A KILLER TO CATCH

Page four:

We see Batman chasing the killer for four panels, until at the fifth panel, Batman tackles him through a window.

Panel Six: We focus on Batman’s face, and the boot kicking it.

Batman internal:

HE’S TRAINED…BETTER BE PREPARED.

Page Five:

Panel One: The man has turned around, he is wearing a clown mask.

Clown:

I’VE PREPARED FOR THIS…BATMAN

Panel Two: He pulls out two butcher knives.

Clown:

MY BOSS DOESN’T LIKE YOU INTERFERING WITH HIS PLANS


The rest of the panels are Batman dodges (with some difficulty) and finally kicks the clown out of the window in panel five.

Panel Six: Concentrate on Batman’s boot, a hand grabs it.

Page Six:

The whole page is three panels of Batman and the clown falling, until they land on the hood of OFFICER GORDON’S car.

Panel One:Batman, while falling tries to interogate the man

 

Batman:

WHO DO YOU WORK FOR!?

 

Clown:

I CAN'T TELL YOU, HE'LL--

 

Panel Two: Batman and the clown falling even further

 

Batman:

HE'LL KILL YOU? THAT'S NOTHING COMPARED TO WHAT I'LL DO TO YOU!

 

Clown (shouting)

AAAAAAAAAAAH--

 

Panel Three: The hit the hood of the car.

 

SFX:

WHUD!

 

 

Page Seven:

Panel One: We see officer Gordon awestruck:

Gordon (shouting):

JESUS!!

 

Panel two: This takes up the rest of the page, Batman gets up, and walks away, unharmed.

Page Eight:

Two Panels, split in half

Panel One: Gordon gets out of his car, and checks for a pulse on the clown.

Panel two, birds eye view. Gordon talks into his radio…

Gordon:

I NEED A MED TEAM HERE… IMMEDIATLEY.

 

Page Ten:

Panel One: Gordon checks into COMMISSIONER DENT’S office.  

Gordon:

YOU WANTED TO SEE ME, SIR?


Panel Two: We see Dent, but only the outline of his shadow. Switch off like this as they speak.

Dent:

I UNDERTAND YOU MET BATMAN?

Gordon:

YES.

Dent:

YOU’RE THE ONLY OFFICER HE HASN’T HOSPITALIZED. I WANT YOU TO KEEP TABS ON HIM. MAKE SURE HE DOESN’T GP OVERBOARD.

Gordon (leaving):  

YES, SIR.

Last Panel: We see Gordon leaving in the background. The door is almost shut. In the center of the page we see Dent’s hand…
Holding his coin.


   

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#3  Edited By CapFanboy
@primepower53: I liked it and not being a huge batman fan and still getting me to like it is a big achievement in itself. I thought you constructed your panels well and you don't litter them with SFX. good job :)
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