The "Feedback" Joint 2.0

Welcome to the “Feedback” Joint! Time for a reboot because the other thread was getting too long

In this thread you can:

• Post Ideas (on characters/stories. Remember we also have the Coming soon thread)
• Request Feedback (for Story/Series)
• Request a "bump" (to your thread if you have double posted)
• Ask Questions/Give advice
• Or anything else you can think of...

Visit our NEW writer's thread! for help and links to current contests you can participate in! Remember to follow the Fan-Fic Rules in this thread and others!

@The Poet: Coolio!

@The Poet: Good idea

@The Poet: Hey could someone plese check out my reverse marvel unicverse fan-fic ? I feel that it isn't getting much attention.

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/evil-spider-man-and-hero-venom-origins/740671/?

I tried to make a fan fic but no one really looked at it so I guess you know.

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/the-forbidden-lance/744146/#1

Oh and this one too this one is really good and I'd want to continue but no one seems to be paying attention:

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/death-seeker-of-nostradamus/744049/#4

I've got another one:

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/the-white-purse/744255/#1

so far I'm glad I rebooted this thread...

going to be using this as my "stuff to read" list...So at the very least you know when posting here you will get feedback from me...something I just couldn't do with the old thread...

I'd greatly appreciate any feedback on my Lucifer Grimm series. I could also use more comments on my Mayhem admission title: Spoiler Alert!.

This is great! I'm glad that you rebooted this!

Since this is something new, I'll re post my entire "Red Steel: Showdown" series so I could get more feedback!

Red Steel: Showdown

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

@The Poet said:

so far I'm glad I rebooted this thread...

going to be using this as my "stuff to read" list...So at the very least you know when posting here you will get feedback from me...something I just couldn't do with the old thread...

In that case....

DC 1602: The Dark Knight

@wildvine: @The Poet: (I linked you because you are online :))

Can someone give me their opinion on my Trigger book? Its a new character.

Thank you

I would like some feedback for my newest series, JLA:The Silver Age. It's not perfect, but it's my 1st in a while.

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/jla-the-silver-age-rated-t/746666

Bump!

@2099man: I'll check it out.

@Project_Worm: thanks. please make sure to reply. ^^

@The Poet: @batkevin74:

Wanted to know your opinion on how I'm going to write Ms. Marvel.

Her "sub-universe"(like how Batman's "universe" is Gotham City, Superman's is Metropolis,etc.) will be the The Annihilators(minus Quasar).

So Part 1 of my run will involve her origin being retold, and her journey from human to hero, and Part 2 will follow her involvement with the team's journeys through the stars.

Marvel Re-Imagined: X-Men #10

Please give feedback and what you want to see next in the series. Any certain characters you want to have a cameo or story?

I would like some feedback on my Mind Warper series:

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

THE CURSE OF KHONSHU - ONE-SHOT! - (Script)

Been posting up some Bioshock Infinite fan fiction, but only 2 some people regularly look at it. Can you read the installments and give feedback? I kind of need it because its a reader's choice thing; I ask a question at the end of a chapter. Whichever choice gets the most votes influences the next chapter and events. Oh, and the story is called Bioshock Infinite: Cybernetic Darwinism.

I finally made chapter two. :) http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/jlathe-silver-age-chapter-two-rated-t/754572/#2

Chapter 7, after a four (maybe five) month hiatus:

City on fire, Part 7: Just Another Day In The Neighborhood.

Thank you for your time.

Madame Techia #0 To every person who reads/comments I will read/comment on one of your stories.

I would love some feed back on my Blue Marvel Fanfic. This is my first stab at writing for myself and I would love to know what I am doing right and what I am doing wrong and whether or not I am writing an engaging story (the most important part!).

Here is the link (normal links aren't working for me for some reason right now)

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/saga-of-the-blue-marvel-1450515/#7

I fell in love with the character when I first discovered him and with him being an almost blank slate I didn't have tons of continuity to sort through. I have taken a lot of my characterization of him from Superman in The Dark Knight returns. A guy whose deeply patriotic due to his 50's upbringing trying to deal with a society that needs him but doesn't want him.

Grimm ch 1

Grimm ch 2

Grimm ch 3

Grimm ch 4

I could really use some feedback to see where I could improve on this

I'm actually starting to get annoyed by my lack of feedback not that I feel entitled to it but I find it helpful. I'm not asking for praise I'll accept negative feedback as well because if I don't know what I'm doing wrong then I can't fix it.

@joshmightbe: Original titles are hard to pick up, especially if it isn't immediately recognized as DC or Marvel. Maybe join up with S inc. or Innovation Inc. They work with original title's and if viners see a Circle's name tagged on your title it should get more of a buzz. Just my opinion.

@dngn4774: I'm the founder of Marvel Iron Age

@dngn4774: Grimm is intended to be kind of my ode to the whole fantasy and adventure genres with a few horror elements thrown in for fun. So while yes it does start out with vampires and werewolves it will move into the more fantasy and mythology related elements, for instance my next arc is going to feature sea monsters and a famous hero from Greek mythology.

Hi Guys, If you have time, please check out my story 'The Tomorrow People: First Day'. It's an x-men fan-fic, but in my version the school is run by Mystique and Beast. It's my first go and fan fiction, so please be kind. I've posted the first part, and if it's popular enough I'll add more. Thanks in advance.

http://www.comicvine.com/profile/frochez/blog/the-tomorrow-people-first-day-part-1-an-x-men-fanf/90736/

Civil War # 1

I was wondering if people would give feedback on my Batboy/Catgirl story. I only have the first chapter up right now, but I'm working on the second one. If you could tell me how I could improve it, that would be of help.

www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/earth-217-batboy-catgirl-1-1464862/#0

Also if somebody could tell me how to link to forum threads, that would be of a lot of help, because whenever I use the Link button, it always says " 'tis a barren wasteland" whenever I tell it what the link to the thread is.

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/new-marvel-dc-green-lantern-1-1465880/#0

I know it's not that good, but I tried my best.

I would like to know what people's preferred reading length and style is... I mean do you like prose or script? Do you prefer 1, 2, 3, 4, or whatever amount of standard 12pt font pages? The reason I ask is I'm thinking of taking up fan-fic writing to to a specific length and schedule to help me get writing constantly...

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/earth-2-5-samaritan-no-1-1473167/#2

My 1st fic for dngn4774's fanfic group. hope you all like.

Hi

Just wrote this: http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/wwz-1941-part-2-desperate-measures-1476605/#0

Also part one: http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/wwz-1941-part-1-blitzkrieg-1473492/

I was about to message every one of my followers, but I remembered seeing this reboot of my original thread (which I am sorry for not getting back to, things just became a little too hectic in reality.) I wanted to tell everyone that I will be returning to Comic Vine here shortly with new chapters throughout each of my series and would also like to tell everyone to check out the last work done by myself and moviegeek17. There will be new additions to this series as soon as I get a grip of a Word Processor, lol. Until then, I hope you enjoy and please, please, please tell us what you think via comment :)

Huntress: Trauma (Part One)


As well as a full collection of works, which you can find here:
Table of Contents

Hey guys, I'm back. I've been very busy lately. I really missed this site a lot and yet I'm not used to some new changes to this site, which is ok by the way. :P I've made some updates to the Wolverine Introduction page. Basically, I've decided to write the sequel series to Project X: The Birth of Wolverine. This is the series I've been waiting to write for a while but didn't had to time to write earlier since I had a lot of work to do. Anyways, check out the updates and I've also posted prologue and chapter 1 so far. I'll be providing chapter links later to the wikispaces page in order to access the links easily.

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/project-x-the-birth-of-wolverine-623874/#24

The chapter links are updated. Check it out, bubs.

http://marvel-genesis.wikispaces.com/Wolverine

I have written a submission for a uk publisher, could I get some feedback please?

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/comic-submission-for-comic-book-publisher-feedback-1487301/#0

I just post one chapter of a re-invented aquaman, the idea is an year long arc (12 chapters), i would like some feedback, first time writing and english isn't my home idiom.

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/re-invented-dc-aquaman-01-myths-of-the-ocean-1489278/

I have been thinking about doing Big Trouble on Little China fan fic, complete with sketches for the big turns, or even fully illustrated stories if i can find the time. I was planning on doing it after I start get a site &Timblr together, but if anyone on this site would be interested I would throw it up on here.

It would be pre-Big Trouble, following the adventures of a young Egg Chen as an aprentice to a chinese warrior sorcerer who is trying to close the portals to the many Chinese Hells.

So, any interestk?

I would like some feedback on my story.

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/lightning-god-side-story-battle-to-take-rea-1500870/#0

Thanks, I want to know what people thought about it. No one really posted... so kind of disappointed and always second guessing about continuing. Be honest, Ive already started writing the second chapter thrice now.. always come to abandon it.

@consolemaster001: amazing! Your alternate marvel universe is genius, I can't stop imagining the opposite heroes.... Hulk will be scary though xD being a villain and all.

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic-8/iron-man-platinum-beginnings-unfinished-1510052/

Story good need views more or hulk will smash now puny fan fiction reader rawwwwwrrrr

@christianjones: hehe thanks ! I'm currently working on a reverse Sinister Six:

The Savior Six !

Lucifer Grimm Chapter 6

Hey guys, I wanted to ask a question-- and this seemed to be the best to do so-- so I hope you'll humour me.

Do you have one story that you've written that, above all others, you think is your best? If so what would it be, and would you be willing to share? I know I've written loads on the site I post my fanfiction, and there's some stuff I'm really proud of and there's some stuff that is just... plain questionable... but I'd love to see what you're proudest of.

If there's a better place for me to post this request let me know and I'll move it!

Cheers,

Charlie

@houseofmystery: It would be better to start your own thread for this. The "Feedback" Joint is more for feedback on a story you've written, not just general feedback on a question.