@xxxddd:
I have to agree with @RazzaTazz on this one
I am not sure about writing in bold, kind of takes away from the affect.
What I would do if I were you is I would tweak what @dngn4774 said:
@xxxddd Good but a little over the top. Here's how I would write it:
"I find your problem to be trivial."
"Do you have the power to bring back 6 billion people?"
"No."
"Then HELP ME!"
"We're about to embark on a SUICIDE MISSION TO SAVE THE UNIVERSE, and you're worried about one measly planet?"
"It's not one planet, it's my planet. And I plan to protect it."
"Then it seems it is true."
"What's true?"
"That humans know better than anyone else what it is like to make irrational decisions."
"What are you implying?"
"I'm not implying anything, I'm stating a fact."
"Why YOU SON OF A BI-"
Instead of bolding your words. I would put them in italics. Bolding is more stylic thing which is good for forums so people know you are really serious about something, but in writing stories, etc. italics is what really want. It doesn't take away from the actual story (drawing the eye away from the actual content), but it shows the reader the tone of the speaker. In the case where the speaker speaker says "It's my planet..." I would underline it to show even more "umpf" (effort) in his/her words. Same goes to "Stating a fact..." though I'm not sure how much of that phrase should be underlined.
So the way I would write empasis would be:
when the words are really stressed when you say something (like "You stole my toy train!"), then you underline those words. Often times this empasis is connected to shouting or some increase volume. Some writers here use bold or ALL CAPS to empasis these volume increase emphasis. I personally would go with underline.
and you should italisize words which need some empasis. Often times, these are portions where the speaker is sarcastic or just wants emphasize a word. It is slightly different from stuff I would underline because most of the time these are not the words you punch at. Take for instance:
"It's not one planet, it's my planet. And I plan to protect it."
"one" just doesn't have the same passion as "my". If I were the speaker I would have a fist out on "my" because I am revealing my allegiance to my planet.
The one emphasis I am not sure about "worried about one measly planet?" You bolded "one", but every time I read that line aloud I keep emphasizing "measly" so I personally would italize "measly", but why don't you read that line aloud and see what you read it as.
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