IrishLad's School for Gifted Youngsters

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So, called me out yesterday saying that he wanted to have a sort of... class-y thing made for the fan-fic boards, with various writers giving classes on various aspects of fanfiction and handing out tips of their own. I chose the category of "Characterization" and agreed to make a post to start things off. I will have you warned that I am a poor teacher.

A lot of my readers have noted that the characterization of the folks I use is among my most noticeable traits. I attribute this to a few things:

1. Know the characters. This may seem obvious, at first, but I have a feeling that a lot of people write fanfiction (or even original fiction) starring characters they don't truly understand. In order to truly understand a character you have to see more than the hero. For example, let me present the character I'm most often praised for, Harley Quinn:

Who is she?

- A villain. Most people won't see past that. She's "bad".

- Joker's old girlfriend. People who look past the first will then see this.

- Highly Educated

- A Psychiatrist

- Insane

- Childlike

- Romantic

- And a pile of other things.

By taking note of all of these things (relevant to your character, obviously) you get a better and better feel for them. Try to piece these together, ESPECIALLY the ones that don't seem like they should work. An insane psychiatrist? How does that work? A childish romantic? That makes no sense! But they all do make sense. Make them make sense to you, and you shall achieve understanding! This is going to be the most important part. Knowing the character's history is also a good idea -- I can't tell you to read every issue of any comic that your character has ever appeared in, but you should have a solid understanding of where they've been and what they've been through. Keeping these things in mind will help you know how they'll react when similar situations come along.

2. Make that knowledge work for you. You can know everything about a character but still not be sure exactly how to get your ideas across to a reader. This is why I usually write in the first person, when I can -- writing from a character's perspective forces you to see things through their eyes, and once you do that, you force the reader to do the same. Even with third person, however, characterization can be achieved through internal monologue. Describing how a character feels about a given situation in great detail shows the reader what kind of person you're talking about.

3. Make them HUMAN. When I write characters, I have a strong tendency to use their real names as opposed to their "super" names. When you start to get up-close and personal with a character, readers want to hear what's happening with Karen Starr -- not Power Girl. Superman is a title, not a name. Clark Kent is where the important internal struggles and tragedy happens. Remember their flaws -- so you're writing Daredevil? He's blind, but he's fine, right? He has that radar sense and stuff. But that doesn't mean he can see the color of a daffodil, stare out across the wide blue ocean, or see the red of a lover's lips before he kisses them. He's alone in a world of gray, and it's your job to convey that drama and emotion. Just because he can GET BY without eyes doesn't make not really wish he still had them. Obviously, this doesn't count for all non-human characters... in that case, make them martian or whatever.

4. When all else fails, fake it 'til you make it. Most characters have tics and other traits that can be EXPLOITED FOR YOUR GAIN (mwahahahah). For example, Harley has her distinctive accent -- even if you have difficulty grasping her playful demeanor, using the accent will both help you "get in the zone" and may trick your reader into thinking you're doing a good job. When writing Catwoman, use cat puns. When writing Batman, use his trademarked vanishing trick. When writing Etrigan, speak in rhyme. You'll figure it out soon enough!

This concludes my lecture on characterization. I hope you all enjoyed it, and for those aspiring writers, I hope this helped.

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#2  Edited By Joygirl

Bump for those who may have missed it.

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Well done

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#4  Edited By wildvine

This is very informative.

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I like it!

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#6  Edited By rav4

Stripper Harley approves

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#7  Edited By Joygirl

^ What in the world is that from? I recognize it not one iota. Anyway, thanks for reading, to you and all the other folkz.

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#8  Edited By rav4

@Joygirl: It's from the wonderful and amazing Secret Six, by Gail Simone. That's one of Liana's (the stripper girlfriend of Scandal Savage at the time) work friends. She speaks entirely in emotes. Like squee. And baaawww. It's amazing.

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#9  Edited By Joygirl

Ahw! I really need to get that whole damn run, is there a compilation anywhere? I keep checking up on it when I get money but I never know when to start.

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#10  Edited By Joygirl

Bump with updates to the article.

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#11  Edited By Irishlad

Wow it looks extra tidy and shiny well done! :)

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Noice!

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@Joygirl: Bumped

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#15  Edited By xxxddd

@Joygirl: So if a character is perfect, then they're completely unrelatable?

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#16  Edited By Joygirl

Basically, yeah. That's called a "Mary Sue".

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#17  Edited By Pyrogram

@Joygirl: And that is why I hate superman.

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#18  Edited By Irishlad

While Superman is very powerful he still has his weaknesses like magic, kryptonite and just personal conflicts in general in a way he's no different than the god in your av.

A mary sue is someone who always says the right thing and who can never be beaten. *phew* rant over :P

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#19  Edited By Pyrogram

@Irishlad: I was joking mate :P I know what a mary superman sue is xD

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@Irishlad: @Pyrogram: Rofl, Irish gets exhausted after a single small paragraph. :P

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#21  Edited By Pyrogram

@Joygirl: He would hate the off-topic rants xD

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#22  Edited By Project_Worm

@Joygirl said:

@Irishlad: @Pyrogram: Rofl, Irish gets exhausted after a single small paragraph. :P

Same here!! That's why I can never finish anything. >_>

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#23  Edited By Mediumflyer7

Helpful ideas :)

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@Joygirl: Thanks.

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#25  Edited By xxxddd

I've made the mistake of writing my stories based on mere events, and not character development. And what I've ended up creating is a bland mess with nothing connecting with me(as the reader) since the story isn't based on character conflict and development.

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@xxxddd: That can be a toughie. D: Hope this helped a bit. ^_^

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http://www.comicvine.com/profile/anurag_50/blog/the-elemental-a-reboot-of-shaktimaan/97005/

Is it working?

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#29  Edited By johnny_blaze

Not bad.

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#30 anthp2000  Moderator

That's great help!

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@joygirl: I've been meaning to check these out. Not bad advice.

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@joygirl: I think that characterization is one of the things that people rush too much. It can be tempting though when a writer sits and thinks to themselves "What would be more fun to write? The action sequence or the in-depth characterization to make my character 3-Dimensional"

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