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#1 Edited by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

So....random people on the internet were interested in my writing. Long story short I agreed to edit/revise their fan fics on fanfiction.net.

I thought I'd do the same here.

Anyone want a piece revised? Edited? Need help in a style of writing/how to word it/whatever else?

I'll take that job. Just shoot me a PM. All I ask is for a bit of credit in the fic itself. Anyone is welcome to ask for help with their fics. IT'S FREE!

EDIT: When I get a PM, please PM me stating what you need help/advice with. Whether it be simple editing for grammar/punctuation, feedback on the story, advice on writing action, descriptions, dialogue or what have you. Please state what you would like me to edit/give advice for.

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#2 Posted by AweSam (7527 posts) - - Show Bio

@CapFanboy said:

Yet another thread derailed by CAPFANBOY!

New record. I should make a list of threads you ruined.

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#3 Posted by The Poet (8646 posts) - - Show Bio

@CapFanboy said:

@AweSam said:

@CapFanboy said:

Yet another thread derailed by CAPFANBOY!

New record. I should make a list of threads you ruined.

It'd be longer than Collection thread

I concur.

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#4 Posted by The Poet (8646 posts) - - Show Bio

@primepower53: I can delete comments. Just throwing it out there...

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#5 Posted by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

@The Poet: please delete the first three

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#6 Posted by The Poet (8646 posts) - - Show Bio

@primepower53: Done.

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#7 Posted by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

@The Poet: thanks

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#8 Posted by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

bump

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#9 Posted by SyIar (414 posts) - - Show Bio

I would love someone to revise/edit/help me improve my writing.

If you're still up for it and i'm almost finished with something you can help me with.

Thanks dude.

It's pretty awesome that you're taking the time to do this for free nonetheless.

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#10 Posted by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

@SyIar: I SHALL DO IT!

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#11 Posted by darth_brendroid (1725 posts) - - Show Bio

Would it be alright if I got you to help look over a couple of chapters I've got?

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#12 Posted by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

@darth_brendroid said:

Would it be alright if I got you to help look over a couple of chapters I've got?

sure. No problem.

Three requests so far. I'd say this "business' is off to a pretty good start.

Shoot me a PM and let me know what specifically you're having trouble with. Dialogue, action, etc.

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#14 Posted by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

@CapFanboy: done

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#15 Posted by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

So far I've helped , , and . Waiting on to get back to me

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#17 Posted by feebadger (1599 posts) - - Show Bio

you are a conscientious and driven man prime power. Bless ya ;P

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#18 Posted by primepower53 (6064 posts) - - Show Bio

@feebadger said:

you are a conscientious and driven man prime power. Bless ya ;P

haha, thanks!