Editing fan fics

So....random people on the internet were interested in my writing. Long story short I agreed to edit/revise their fan fics on fanfiction.net.

I thought I'd do the same here.

Anyone want a piece revised? Edited? Need help in a style of writing/how to word it/whatever else?

I'll take that job. Just shoot me a PM. All I ask is for a bit of credit in the fic itself. Anyone is welcome to ask for help with their fics. IT'S FREE!

EDIT: When I get a PM, please PM me stating what you need help/advice with. Whether it be simple editing for grammar/punctuation, feedback on the story, advice on writing action, descriptions, dialogue or what have you. Please state what you would like me to edit/give advice for.

@CapFanboy said:

Yet another thread derailed by CAPFANBOY!

New record. I should make a list of threads you ruined.

@CapFanboy said:

@AweSam said:

@CapFanboy said:

Yet another thread derailed by CAPFANBOY!

New record. I should make a list of threads you ruined.

It'd be longer than @The Poet's Collection thread

I concur.

@primepower53: I can delete comments. Just throwing it out there...

@The Poet: please delete the first three

@primepower53: Done.

@The Poet: thanks

bump

I would love someone to revise/edit/help me improve my writing.

If you're still up for it and i'm almost finished with something you can help me with.

Thanks dude.

It's pretty awesome that you're taking the time to do this for free nonetheless.

@SyIar: I SHALL DO IT!

Would it be alright if I got you to help look over a couple of chapters I've got?

@darth_brendroid said:

Would it be alright if I got you to help look over a couple of chapters I've got?

sure. No problem.

Three requests so far. I'd say this "business' is off to a pretty good start.

Shoot me a PM and let me know what specifically you're having trouble with. Dialogue, action, etc.

@primepower53: You may also want to offer this here ----> http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/the-new-writers-thread-reboot/682527/

@CapFanboy: done

So far I've helped @poze , @SyIar , and @Irishlad . Waiting on @darth_brendroid to get back to me

Hi! Mr. @primepower53 please read this and see anything wrong tell me if you like it or you dont like it. I will kindly pm you the whole story after you read it http://www.comicvine.com/myvine/underdogs_overboard/the-epic-wish-of-a-geek-named-neil-part-1/87-83067/ thanks!!!

@primepower53 you are a conscientious and driven man prime power. Bless ya ;P

@feebadger said:

@primepower53 you are a conscientious and driven man prime power. Bless ya ;P

haha, thanks!