Batman vs Spiderman

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Pt. 1

Batman and spiderman are fighting in a warehouse on the third floor. Batman realizes spiderman's speed and reaction time and says "It's like you know what I'll do before I do it." Spiderman would say "Haha! Yeah, good old spidey sense!" Batman'd try and deceive his spidey sense by throwing multiple baterangs at once at him, spiderman blocks them easily and yells IS THAT ALL YOU'VE GOT?! Batman drops smoke pallets then starts "Field testing", he goes to the second floor puts down some glue grenade on the wooden floor and ceiling, batman then quickly goes to the third floor window and tries to attack spiderman from behind but spiderman threw him across the room so batman threw more baterangs, while spiderman handled the baterang and disappears. Spiderman says "Oh! You're one of those ninja guys! Right?! Tell me I'm right!" Spiderman decides to go "Ninja Style" also. He doesn't know batman has x-ray, thermal, and night vision installed into his suit.

Pt. 2

Spiderman thinks he's perfectly hidden, while he is, he webs down the floor so batman'll stick to it when he comes back. Spiderman's spidey sense tingle, he senses danger but where is it coming from? Spiderman quickly jumps off the roof corner and batman comes bursting through from behind and landing right into his webs. Spiderman goes in for a killer-stomp on batman's chest, but batman detonates the glue under him, spiderman webs the walls and looks down into the dust, batman's gone. Within mere seconds he's behind spiderman (this is possible: http://s289.photobucket.com/user/darknight2k/media/Agility-Speed/Speed/batwomanannual1-batvsgrenades2.jpg.html) but spiderman senses him, elbows him in the stomach, tries t punch batman but batman blocks it and they go into a fist-fight. Spiderman's going on the offensive with punches and kicks, one after another. Batman's barely able to dodge and block his attacks, batman decides to go on the offensive also. Batman's aware of his senses so he starts to use illusions, but he had to act fast.

Pt. 3

Batman threw a punch, spiderman ducked, but he ducked into batman's knee. With batman's strength and armor, that knee to his jaw hurt. Spiderman rushed back in, instead, he just webs batman's hands to the floor and attempts to drop-kick batman while he's strapped in, spiderman yells "BOOYA!" batman doesn't fight his webs, he simply just drops with them and spiderman misses, batman's gotten out and has used the grapple hook while spiderman's back was turned, spiderman barely got away. It's gotten his foot when he jumped. Batman yanks spiderman down and goes in for an upper-cut. He misses and spiderman's already on batman's left side and kicks batman into the wall, fracturing his ribs and webs him to it. Spiderman starts to talk about how batman has surprisingly lasted longer than he thought, but in the middle of the lecture, batman has dropped smoke and when the smoke faded, he was gone. RIGHT after that moment, spiderman's spidey sense tangled and spiderman instantly looked behind him, but nope. Batman came from under and pulled him by his legs and hung him to the ceiling. Spiderman laughs and said "You had a HUGE advantage but you used it to let me sit here like this twig is gonna hold me?" Batman said "No" and right then was when his grapple let out an electric shock going all the way through spiderman's body and batman threw explosive baterangs at spiderman, spiderman used his speed and the very little strength he had left being that his body was still tingling from the electricution and dodged it. Spiderman catapults himself from the ceiling DIRECTLY into batman and got electrified again, except with 1500lbs of muscle to it -- batman activated his shock gloves and upper-cutted spiderman with super human-like speed. Spiderman was still smiling because he had webbed batman's feet to a wall behind him and batman got pulled in and slammed right into the wall.

Pt. 4

Spiderman -- feeling dizzy still -- webs chairs and launches them at batman on the wall, but batman has again gotten out of his webs, dodged the chairs and threw sonic reactors on the floors of the warehouse, spiderman's brain goes crazy and he goes to each of the reactors and smashes them. Batman fights spiderman while his speed is a bit reduced and his senses messed up a bit. They they were having an equal fight, and spiderman was trying not to use full-force strength on batman, but batman ended up kneeing spiderman in the nuts, head-butted him, gutted spiderman in the stomach, while spiderman was facing forward, batman had also slammed his face into the wall then attempted to break his arm. Spiderman gets pissed and throws batman with that arm into the building, and starts laying bod-shots after body shots onto batman till batman's armor eventually broke, webs batman's face into a wall and is ready to punch it in when he senses more danger, spiderman is upset to he just breaks batman's ribs instead, spiderman turns around and there's a SWARM of bats flying through. they were scratching and biting spiderman but Spiderman couldn't handle them all so he got out of there, batman, also pissed off, grapples to spiderman's location and tackles him onto the floor. Batman can't move, spiderman punched a termporarily paralyze pressure point, he comes from under batman and just launches batman into a building, batman's back is now hurting. Batman isn't in any condition to fight but spiderman is still in "ok" shape.

Pt. 5

Batman throws a baterang, spiderman dodges with ease but it explodes RIGHT behind spiderman, spiderman flies forward but he uses his webs to stop himself from flying into batman's "punch". When in reality, batman's batmobile fired an explosive shot at spiderman, spiderman -- in a weird and akward position -- tries his hardest to dodge but is still nipped in the foot and the explosion from the shot exploded under spiderman making him fly up, batman grapples him down into the floor where his glue grenade was at and spiderman ducks out. Batman launches smoke pallets at spiderman, spiderman throws those back at batman. Batman disappears. Smoke pallets all over the warehouse starts going off, spiderman's spidey sense is tangling ridiculously, but he can't see! Spiderman ducks and luckily has dodged a baterang, but that wasn't the REAL danger. The real danger was batman coming from behind spiderman with a leadpipe, and swings it in the back of spiderman's head. Spiderman's head is RINGING now. But spiderman retaliates and very swiftly grabs batman, breaks his shoulder blade (while in the process of grabbing him) and slams him to the floor of the warehouse. Spiderman destroy's all the pillars to the ware-house and the building collapses. Batman tried to escape but spiderman webbed him back inside of the warehouse. Spiderman's spidey sense is tingling, it wasn't batman, he was in an abandoned building, it wasn't his batmobile, that wasn't currently operating, it was just a bad moment for his spidey sense to do the "random" ringing. The warehouse has collapsed, spiderman becomes extremely irritated by this "human".

Pt. 6

He finds batman standing on top of the debris through smoke, spiderman rushes to batman, but it was just a stick of wood with a cape. Spidey Sense. But batman still ended up side-kicking spiderman. They were at a stand off, face to face, they both were running at each other ready for a fight, spiderman's spidey sense -- but he can see the clear threat in front of him until batman jumps OVER spiderman and the batmobile smacks spiderman in the back, and running him into the river. Spiderman leaps out of the ocean and webs batman in the chest, batman equips his ice- grenade and sticks it to the web, the ice froze all the way up to spiderman's wrist, freezing the blood inside of his wrist and the webs in that wrist. Spiderman is pissed and is ready to go full force on batman. Spiderman wouldn't risk grabbing with another web, so he just shoots one at batman, batman uses the ice grenade on it and breaks out just BARELY missing spiderman's fist in his face as spiderman punched through a brick wall. Spiderman, very annoyed says "You're just a box of surprizes aren't you?". Spiderman, using lots of his webs to hold batman down for at least a few seconds, sprays at batman but batman dodged it and says "I'm tired of those things". Spiderman replies "Oh really..?" then starts SPRAYING batman with webs, it's too many for batman to dodge until his webs are thick enough to hold him while spiderman goes to demolish batman's batmobile. But he can't, batman's material is stronger than military grade equipment, so he just sprays the barrel down with webs. Turns around, batman's out of his webs. Spidey Sense! Spiderman sees a Ice grenade heading his way, but from past experience, he knows it's just a trick. Spiderman simply moves his head and the bomb whizzes past spiderman and right onto batman. Spiderman then punches the iceberg batman's in straight into the river. Spiderman, very relieved and grinning, shouts "And stay down!".

Pt. 7

Batman swims back up and says "You cracked the ice... idiot.." Spiderman, wishing he was a killer, says "Right... maybe I should have thought that out?". Batman -- in terrible condition -- secretly tells alfred to drop in an air drop. Batman thinksI just have to hold him off for 30 seconds... Spiderman says, why did you stand there like I hadn't thought something up? Batman looks down and sees a web going past his body and onto the boat behind, spiderman pulls it but batman quickly drops prone on the floor and dodges it. Spiderman is RIGHT above batman with astonishing speed and says "You miss me?", punches batman in the face a few times and picks him up by the throat, looks at batman and batman's all bruised up, shakes his head and right before spiderman tosses him into the river, batman wraps his legs around spiderman's neck and flips him forward. When spiderman gets up he sees batman with his cape back. Spiderman knows he has that cape for a reason after all -- he is an analyst too. Batman's air-drop is in, spiderman doesn't want him to have it so he quickly webs it out of batmans hand and launches it to the other side of Gotham. Batman's still smiling because he already got a dose and says to spiderman "You could have used that second dose for yourself.." Spiderman knew he needed it, after all, his face, head, and balls weren't feeling too great.

Pt. 8

Spiderman's swings up in the air, high above batman and on his way down he creates this huge spider-boulder and swings it down atop batman. But batman jumps out of the way, spiderman swings that thing over and over to make batman lose balance, then lets go of the boulder and grabs batman's leg and squeezes it and says "Give up now! You've lost!" batman, tired, says "Not yet!" and sticks a freeze grenade onto spiderman's chest, then INSTANTLY activates his shock gloves, grabs the ice-berg, freezing and electrucuting spiderman inside, lets go to remove his cape and spiderman breaks free, RIGHT after he breaks free batman tossed the cape over spiderman's face and spiderman quickly removed the cape and batman's Shock-Fist with glue grenade tainted on top to add an extra "boom" is an inch away from spiderman's jaw. Batman hits spiderman in the jaw and explodes the glue grenade at the same time, knocking spiderman 17 feet back. Spiderman gets up and adjusts his jaw. Batman has called down his Buster suit. They charge at each other.

Not finished

All this COULD happen -- right?

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#3 wildvine  Moderator

Typos, two characters speaking in the same paragraph. Batman isn't a verb and shouldn't be contracted. Awkward phrasing like Spider-Man referring to Batman as 'human' and awkward tenses. Putting the link in the middle of the scene was badly placed and broke any narrative that was built.

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