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#1 Edited by k4tzm4n (40077 posts) - - Show Bio

Daken sits alone in a bar, his hand clenching a cold smirnoff ice as he watches a television behind the bartender. It's a baseball game between the Boston Red Sox and New York Yankees.

"How can you like such a borning sport? Turn that garbage off," Daken states to the elderly bartender.

"What's the matter, kid? Don't like the classic past time?"

"I have a different past time..." Daken mutters as he puts down his drink and stares at the table for a minute.

"And that's crying about my father!" Daken screams as tears pour out of his eyes. He runs away, flailing his arms, and jumps through a window.

"Man... What a little brat."

The end.

Hey, we never agreed on the quality of the story. :)

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#2 Posted by ComicMan24 (147651 posts) - - Show Bio

LOL

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#3 Posted by Amegashita (3601 posts) - - Show Bio

  I got lost at line 6-7 but I was laughing at the end. 

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#4 Posted by k4tzm4n (40077 posts) - - Show Bio

If there's enough positive feedback, I might be kind enough to grace your monitors with another equally epic story :O
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#5 Posted by vance_astro (89987 posts) - - Show Bio

LMFAO..this is worst than Vance Astro:Revenge of Grape Soda!

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#6 Posted by k4tzm4n (40077 posts) - - Show Bio
@Vance Astro said:
"LMFAO..this is best thing I've ever read! "
You're too kind, Vance.
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#7 Posted by Morpheus_ (30445 posts) - - Show Bio
Bastardo, K4tz. This infamita will be repayed in blood.
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#8 Posted by k4tzm4n (40077 posts) - - Show Bio
@Morpheus_ said:
"Bravo, K4tz. This work will be printed in the history books. "

Glad you approrve.
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#9 Posted by InnerVenom123 (29887 posts) - - Show Bio

LMFAO! EPIC!
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#10 Posted by Strafe Prower (13007 posts) - - Show Bio
@Vance Astro said:
" LMFAO..this is worst than Vance Astro:Revenge of Grape Soda! "
God that was hilarious. That was a long time ago.
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#11 Posted by ~The Wanderer~ (34199 posts) - - Show Bio

lmfao! xD
You sir, win at life.

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#12 Posted by k4tzm4n (40077 posts) - - Show Bio
@~The Wanderer~:
Thanks!
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#13 Posted by mavfan626 (4560 posts) - - Show Bio

Lol

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#14 Posted by k4tzm4n (40077 posts) - - Show Bio

Man, I should make a pt 2, shouldn't I?

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#15 Posted by NlGHTCRAWLER (2896 posts) - - Show Bio

@k4tzm4n said:

Man, I should make a pt 2, shouldn't I?

Doo It!

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#16 Posted by YoungJustice (7316 posts) - - Show Bio

@k4tzm4n said:

Man, I should make a pt 2, shouldn't I?